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I'm an African, with an American attached to my name,
a lot of cultured people like wearing nationalistic, hyphenated accessory
My people arrived on a no-class ship when they came,
ashes and sackcloth are a part of every country's wardrobe history

A lot of cultured people like wearing nationalistic, hyphenated accessory,
it feels good to be dressed in the colors of a pretty flag
Ashes and sackcloth are a part of every country's wardrobe history;
blood, sweat and tears can't be packaged and put in a bag

It feels good to be dressed in the colors of a pretty flag,
just don't make waves if you see some spots on the cloth
Blood, sweat and tears can't be packaged and put in a bag
sad to see all that labor get eaten up by profit hungry moth

Just don't make waves if you see some spots on the cloth,
as long as your conscience is clean, everything is alright
Sad to see all that labor get eaten up by profit hungry moth
minimum rage living is the upper-class' dignified plight

As long as your conscience is clean, everything is alright
My people arrived on a no-class ship when they came
Minimum rage living is the upper-class' dignified plight ---
I'm an African, with an American attached to my name

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Date: 11/28/2016 8:11:00 PM
Excellent, RW! So that's what a pantoum is! Haha. Great stuff bro.
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Date: 11/28/2016 8:46:00 AM
Hi Freddie, This is such a deep write. I enjoyed every bit of it from start to finish. The repeated lines added more depth to this write. Your title alone intrigued me.I was moved by the line" Im an African, with an American attached to my name". WoW! The ink that flows from your pen is impactful and amazing. Well done my friend. A Big seven and fav:-) Alexis PS. Great Pantoum by the way!
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Date: 11/28/2016 8:30:00 AM
Such an uplifting and encouraging message is contained in your words today Freddie. It is not our place to judge, but to accept and learn from everyone we meet. Wonderfully expressed.
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Date: 11/28/2016 3:31:00 AM
wow! totally loved it. rating...
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