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Nameless and Unwanted

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This is fictional. I wrote it just for the contest.

I was left in an alley at birth thrown away like a filthy rag I never felt love or care just discarded and lost I was nobody down to the core a tarnished nameless soul 4-20-17 Contest : N Form Sponsor : Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2017 4:33:00 PM

I love how you approached this theme of nameless, Alexis. Congrats on your well deserved win

Paul Callus

Date: 5/6/2017 7:50:00 AM

I like how you tackled the 'nameless' topic, Alexis. You touch the reader's heart. Congratulations on placing high in this contest. Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 5/5/2017 10:50:00 AM

Alexis congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful and emotional Nonet

Alexis Y.
Date: 5/6/2017 3:25:00 PM

Hi BW, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate my placement. You held an great contest:-) Alexis

Agnes Krampe

Date: 5/5/2017 8:35:00 AM

Stunning poem on a heartbreaking topic, Alexis. Congrats on your win.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 5/5/2017 3:55:00 AM

Hi Alexis. Congrats for your placement, with this emotional piece :(

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2017 6:37:00 PM

many congrats on your win Alexis:-) Hugs jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 5/4/2017 5:47:00 PM

Just me again... popping back to offer my congratulations on a great win! Regards, John.

Joseph May

Date: 5/4/2017 4:37:00 PM

So sad Alexis...Congrats on your win

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 5/4/2017 2:58:00 PM

This is sad but true of millions of people.Congrats!

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/4/2017 2:52:00 PM

Back to congratulate you, Alexis, on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 4/23/2017 8:19:00 AM

I agree w/Jo. This is tragic write, but it is honest. Some people are discarded like trash. Powerful poem, Alexis. Love and hugs to you.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/23/2017 8:16:00 AM

Very sad write, Alexis, written with great feeling and pain:) hope this places high, a 7:)

White Wolf

Date: 4/21/2017 12:20:00 AM

I might as well withdraw mine now! Haha. But I am glad that it is fictional, Alexis! Very imaginative! GL

Eve Roper

Date: 4/20/2017 11:21:00 PM

This is marvelous, Alexis, a winner already... :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2017 8:47:00 PM

wow, I love how you did Nameless!! heartbreaking!

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2017 8:20:00 PM

An absolutely heartbreaking scenario Alexis. I can't imagine finding out that you had been abandoned by the one who gave you life:-( hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 4/20/2017 6:24:00 PM

Aaww... that's so sad. Powerful piece, carefully crafted. Good luck with the contest! Regards, John.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/20/2017 4:34:00 PM

Deep, dark and heart-wrenching are the thoughts in your well-written Nonet, Alexis. You have made your title come sadly alive. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/20/2017 2:49:00 PM

You touched me so deeply..because any life..especially that of a child is so close to my heart.I know such situations truely happen everynow and then..and it is terribly sad sweet one...So much said in few dear friend.

Chris Green

Date: 4/20/2017 12:22:00 PM

Sad, lonely and agonizing is your poem my friend. The form, the narrowing towards the bottom just gives this so much depth and feeling. But to this poem I say................................. And you were found, one rain filled night, by those who cared, and those of light, who lifted you, and said your name, so now your life, was not the same, for poets come, when there is need, with words of hope, from heart now bleed. :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/20/2017 1:58:00 PM

WoW! Chris, That was one of the best comments I've ever had. Thanks for your continued support. Your response is a poem in it's self:-) Alexis