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Nameless and Unwanted

I was left in an alley at birth 
thrown away like a filthy rag
I never felt love or care 
just discarded and lost 
I was nobody 
down to the core
a tarnished 
nameless 
soul






4-20-17
Contest : N Form
Sponsor : Broken Wings

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/7/2017 4:33:00 PM I love how you approached this theme of nameless, Alexis. Congrats on your well deserved win Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 5/6/2017 7:50:00 AM I like how you tackled the 'nameless' topic, Alexis. You touch the reader's heart. Congratulations on placing high in this contest. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 5/5/2017 10:50:00 AM Alexis congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful and emotional Nonet Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 5/6/2017 3:25:00 PM Hi BW, Thanks for stopping by to congratulate me. I appreciate my placement. You held an great contest:-) Alexis

Agnes Krampe Date: 5/5/2017 8:35:00 AM Stunning poem on a heartbreaking topic, Alexis. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 5/5/2017 3:55:00 AM Hi Alexis. Congrats for your placement, with this emotional piece :( Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 5/4/2017 6:37:00 PM many congrats on your win Alexis:-) Hugs jan xx Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 5/4/2017 5:47:00 PM Just me again... popping back to offer my congratulations on a great win! Regards, John. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/4/2017 4:37:00 PM So sad Alexis...Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Sara Chansarkar Date: 5/4/2017 2:58:00 PM This is sad but true of millions of people.Congrats! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 5/4/2017 2:52:00 PM Back to congratulate you, Alexis, on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 4/23/2017 8:19:00 AM I agree w/Jo. This is tragic write, but it is honest. Some people are discarded like trash. Powerful poem, Alexis. Love and hugs to you. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 4/23/2017 8:16:00 AM Very sad write, Alexis, written with great feeling and pain:) hope this places high, a 7:) Login to Reply

White Wolf Date: 4/21/2017 12:20:00 AM I might as well withdraw mine now! Haha. But I am glad that it is fictional, Alexis! Very imaginative! GL Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/20/2017 11:21:00 PM This is marvelous, Alexis, a winner already... :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/20/2017 8:47:00 PM wow, I love how you did Nameless!! heartbreaking! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/20/2017 8:20:00 PM An absolutely heartbreaking scenario Alexis. I can't imagine finding out that you had been abandoned by the one who gave you life:-( hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

John Michaels Date: 4/20/2017 6:24:00 PM Aaww... that's so sad. Powerful piece, carefully crafted. Good luck with the contest! Regards, John. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 4/20/2017 4:34:00 PM Deep, dark and heart-wrenching are the thoughts in your well-written Nonet, Alexis. You have made your title come sadly alive. Best wishes for the contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 4/20/2017 2:49:00 PM You touched me so deeply..because any life..especially that of a child is so close to my heart.I know such situations truely happen everynow and then..and it is terribly sad sweet one...So much said in few dear friend. Login to Reply

Chris Green Date: 4/20/2017 12:22:00 PM Sad, lonely and agonizing is your poem my friend. The form, the narrowing towards the bottom just gives this so much depth and feeling. But to this poem I say................................. And you were found, one rain filled night, by those who cared, and those of light, who lifted you, and said your name, so now your life, was not the same, for poets come, when there is need, with words of hope, from heart now bleed. :) Login to Reply Alexis Y. Date: 4/20/2017 1:58:00 PM WoW! Chris, That was one of the best comments I've ever had. Thanks for your continued support. Your response is a poem in it's self:-) Alexis