Name This Instrument

The first time I heard this I was in disbelief.
As he readied to play he rosined a long bow.
And he played with a flair of beauty and motif, 
“On a hill far away” the notes softly and slow.

Without breaking his stride “In the garden”, he played.
I heard voices of angels in tune through it all.
The heads bow, their lips move, the congregation prayed.
Not intending to preach, someone issued the call.

Through it all the strange notes woefully made demand.
Like a Stradivari, rosined strings strike their hearts.
“Oh why not tonight” played, commanding those at hand,
with small pricks of conscience from the music’s tearful darts

At the end, the blind man, with the bow cross his chair.
Swore he heard the soft voice, Seraphim singing slow.
Saying, now find the thing that was played if you care
should you please rearrange the anagram below

            CASUAL SWIM (two words)

©This poem in anapestic tetrameter for 
Nette’s “sound madness”  contest
24 Oct 2011 Charles Henderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Song Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 8:47 PM
Congrats to you, Charles....this is a beauty...brought back memories of my old church...Gwendolen
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November 3, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Congratulations Charles. Well deserved success... Margaret
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November 3, 2011 at 4:24 PM
Congrats Charles on second place win with this exciting piece on chosen instrument theme luv..
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Sound Madness" contest Charles. Love, Carol
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October 29, 2011 at 3:10 PM
When I got to the second verse...long bow...it hit me, he is playing a saw. This is no doubt one of the best poems I have read on p/s...You also make me stop and look up words, my vocab is very limited. Thanks for sharing the poem. Also what a great message!!!
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October 29, 2011 at 1:55 PM
A very vivid imagey you have masterfully crafted for the skillful musician.
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October 24, 2011 at 6:18 PM
I can see him lovingly fingering his instrument and giving the audience a wonderful performance. A perfect picture you paint of a master musician.
Song Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Hi Charles. We too had a gentleman play this reverent sounding instrument. I always sat in my pew and stared...How did he take such a basic tool and make the Old Rugged Cross sound so heavenly? I truly enjoyed this well written masterpiece. You must have spent a very long time on it. Saving it for my favs. :) Gwendolen
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October 24, 2011 at 11:50 AM
I love the Musical Saw sounding gr8 in your poem, well done!
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2011 at 5:46 AM
I am so happy to see the Soup back up and thrilled to be able to read your wonderful poetry Charles. May you have an exciting week filled with new found inspiration. Love, Carol
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October 24, 2011 at 2:57 AM
Not seen around a lot these days... but you describe it beautifully...Cheers Margaret
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