Fin Chuuk Poet Free verse

Naked Truth

You asked for a naked truth-
I smiled and whispered 
Thought you’d never ask.

So here’s my naked truth, baby. 
I thought I only wanted you for a one night stand 
    and be gone. 
Only I didn’t realize I’d be addicted to you from 
    the instant I felt your lips on mine.
I’ve never felt so much alive and fulfilled  
until your tenderness pervaded into my soul.

              You are it.
           My naked truth.
                The one.
             That I want.
               And need.
                  Tonight.

You smiled and whispered 
Baby, let’s get naked together forever.


Fin Chuuk 
2/4/23

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Speaks Volumes July 20, 2023 at 1:22 AM Such love, flows from your poem like water cascading over a waterfall.. Splendid. I miss you.

Andrea Dietrich March 29, 2023 at 12:20 PM gosh, have I read every single poem of yours? I keep clicking on ones I already commented to! Fin Chuuk March 29, 2023 at 7:42 PM So kind of you, Andrea. I don’t have much here, I tend to read more of everyone else’s rather than writing. Once I start reading, it’s hard to stop. Again thank you for reading and commenting on my poems. I truly appreciate you. Hugs

William P. Harris Sr. March 14, 2023 at 9:02 PM Your heart on paper Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 6:46 PM The hank you so much, William. :)

Joseph May March 9, 2023 at 7:41 AM Passion shines through in this write, Nicely penned Fin Chuuk March 9, 2023 at 3:41 PM Thank you dear Joseph :)

Caren Krutsinger February 18, 2023 at 8:11 AM “I didn’t realize I would be addicted to you”. Totally romantic! WOW! Fin Chuuk February 18, 2023 at 8:45 PM I am smiling from this lovely comment :)

Eve Roper February 16, 2023 at 5:08 PM Very heartfelt from the heart of emotions of love. Fin Chuuk February 18, 2023 at 8:45 PM Eve, thank you so much.

Harry Horsman February 9, 2023 at 9:06 PM Love this this, Fin, the surprise of a kiss, love for some, fatal for others, Love the theme, here, and the poetry superb...Harry Fin Chuuk February 11, 2023 at 4:28 PM Thank you so much dear! ~ Fin

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2023 at 9:36 AM - without a thread ... in Adam's suit ... the truth comes out, Fin - Fin Chuuk February 8, 2023 at 10:27 AM ;) Thank you beautiful!

Valsa George February 8, 2023 at 7:20 AM Very sensuous and romantic ! Great poem Fin. The one night stand paved way to an eternal longing ! Fin Chuuk February 8, 2023 at 10:26 AM Thank you so much, Valsa :)

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2023 at 7:43 PM wow, really nice. I like this a lot. Fin Chuuk February 8, 2023 at 10:26 AM You just made me smile :) Thank you!

Sotto Poet February 7, 2023 at 5:24 PM Fin, you've written a lovely poem. The power of love is not to be underestimated. Well done. Fin Chuuk February 8, 2023 at 10:24 AM Sotto, I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Thank you :)

Paul Callus February 7, 2023 at 7:03 AM The naked truth could make or break a relationship, Fin. A sort of a sweet-sour delicacy with a lingering sweet taste. ~ Regards // paul Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 4:21 PM Thank you, Paul, and yes i agree with you.

Kim Rodrigues February 7, 2023 at 6:45 AM So revealing! Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 4:20 PM Thank you, Kim :)

Heidi Sands February 7, 2023 at 5:45 AM Powerful. Well written Fin ;) Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 4:19 PM Thank you, Heidi :)

Panagiota Romios February 6, 2023 at 7:17 PM We can’t hold on to one night standers. But he will haunt your memory forever. Who,k now’s Fin! I wish you the best Panagiota, o Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 8:56 PM Sometimes complicated, sometimes sweeter :) Thank you so much, Panagiota, and I wish you the very best too. :) ~ Fin

Mystic Rose Rose February 6, 2023 at 1:43 PM very romantic for the Valentine season, I love it Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 8:54 PM Such a pleasure to read to you sweet comment, Mystic. Thank you so much :)

Susan Lawrence February 6, 2023 at 9:00 AM Love the passion here Fin . Your heart open and raw … the only way to be ! Welcome to Soup ! Warmly, Susan :) Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 4:22 PM Thank you so much, Susan :)

Constance La France February 6, 2023 at 7:46 AM Fin, a beautiful romantic write, lovely, well done, one bird lover to another, Constance Fin Chuuk February 7, 2023 at 4:22 PM Thank you beautiful :)

Vijay Pandit February 6, 2023 at 6:00 AM Charming poem, Fin. Love is a force to be reckoned with. Well done. Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 6:11 AM It sure does. Thank you so much :)

Charles Messina February 6, 2023 at 4:04 AM Love at first kiss :) Lovely, Fin Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 6:11 AM I love that, “Love at first kiss.” Thank you :)

Joe Maverick February 6, 2023 at 12:46 AM Explosive stuff here Fin..Specially if its on The other gender..? Either hard and humerous Or soft and tender..' Am I allowed to write such Reality reflections LOL))) Good work though Best wishes and welcome to soup ' Fin Chuuk February 6, 2023 at 6:09 AM Lol… Thanks for the smile. Joe. Imaginary keeps the mind busy ;)

Sara Kendrick February 5, 2023 at 12:41 PM A passionate work that you have penned in this one. I appreciate you dropping by my page with a kind review of my work. Sara Fin Chuuk February 5, 2023 at 6:50 PM Thank you so much Sara… :)

Victor Buhagiar February 5, 2023 at 10:42 AM So a one-night stand turned into romantic love. Delightful. Fin Chuuk February 5, 2023 at 11:29 AM Something like that. Lol.