Naked Truth

You asked for a naked truth- I smiled and whispered Thought you’d never ask. So here’s my naked truth, baby. I thought I only wanted you for a one night stand and be gone. Only I didn’t realize I’d be addicted to you from the instant I felt your lips on mine. I’ve never felt so much alive and fulfilled until your tenderness pervaded into my soul. You are it. My naked truth. The one. That I want. And need. Tonight. You smiled and whispered Baby, let’s get naked together forever. Fin Chuuk 2/4/23

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Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/20/2023 1:22:00 AM

Such love, flows from your poem like water cascading over a waterfall.. Splendid. I miss you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2023 12:20:00 PM

gosh, have I read every single poem of yours? I keep clicking on ones I already commented to!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/29/2023 7:42:00 PM

So kind of you, Andrea. I don’t have much here, I tend to read more of everyone else’s rather than writing. Once I start reading, it’s hard to stop. Again thank you for reading and commenting on my poems. I truly appreciate you. Hugs

William P. Harris

Date: 3/14/2023 9:02:00 PM

Your heart on paper

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/15/2023 6:46:00 PM

The hank you so much, William. :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/9/2023 7:41:00 AM

Passion shines through in this write, Nicely penned

Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/9/2023 3:41:00 PM

Thank you dear Joseph :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/18/2023 8:11:00 AM

“I didn’t realize I would be addicted to you”. Totally romantic! WOW!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/18/2023 8:45:00 PM

I am smiling from this lovely comment :)

Eve Roper

Date: 2/16/2023 5:08:00 PM

Very heartfelt from the heart of emotions of love.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/18/2023 8:45:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/9/2023 9:06:00 PM

Love this this, Fin, the surprise of a kiss, love for some, fatal for others, Love the theme, here, and the poetry superb...Harry

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/11/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thank you so much dear! ~ Fin

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2023 9:36:00 AM

- without a thread ... in Adam's suit ... the truth comes out, Fin -

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/8/2023 10:27:00 AM

;) Thank you beautiful!

Valsa George

Date: 2/8/2023 7:20:00 AM

Very sensuous and romantic ! Great poem Fin. The one night stand paved way to an eternal longing !

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/8/2023 10:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Valsa :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2023 7:43:00 PM

wow, really nice. I like this a lot.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/8/2023 10:26:00 AM

You just made me smile :) Thank you!

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/7/2023 5:24:00 PM

Fin, you've written a lovely poem. The power of love is not to be underestimated. Well done.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/8/2023 10:24:00 AM

Sotto, I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Thank you :)

Paul Callus

Date: 2/7/2023 7:03:00 AM

The naked truth could make or break a relationship, Fin. A sort of a sweet-sour delicacy with a lingering sweet taste. ~ Regards // paul

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 4:21:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, and yes i agree with you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/7/2023 6:45:00 AM

So revealing!

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 4:20:00 PM

Thank you, Kim :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/7/2023 5:45:00 AM

Powerful. Well written Fin ;)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 4:19:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/6/2023 7:17:00 PM

We can’t hold on to one night standers. But he will haunt your memory forever. Who,k now’s Fin! I wish you the best Panagiota, o

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 8:56:00 PM

Sometimes complicated, sometimes sweeter :) Thank you so much, Panagiota, and I wish you the very best too. :) ~ Fin

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/6/2023 1:43:00 PM

very romantic for the Valentine season, I love it

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 8:54:00 PM

Such a pleasure to read to you sweet comment, Mystic. Thank you so much :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 2/6/2023 9:00:00 AM

Love the passion here Fin . Your heart open and raw … the only way to be ! Welcome to Soup ! Warmly, Susan :)

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 4:22:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan :)

Constance La France

Date: 2/6/2023 7:46:00 AM

Fin, a beautiful romantic write, lovely, well done, one bird lover to another, Constance

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/7/2023 4:22:00 PM

Thank you beautiful :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/6/2023 6:00:00 AM

Charming poem, Fin. Love is a force to be reckoned with. Well done.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 6:11:00 AM

It sure does. Thank you so much :)

Charles Messina

Date: 2/6/2023 4:04:00 AM

Love at first kiss :) Lovely, Fin

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 6:11:00 AM

I love that, “Love at first kiss.” Thank you :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 2/6/2023 12:46:00 AM

Explosive stuff here Fin..Specially if its on The other gender..? Either hard and humerous Or soft and tender..' Am I allowed to write such Reality reflections LOL))) Good work though Best wishes and welcome to soup '

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/6/2023 6:09:00 AM

Lol… Thanks for the smile. Joe. Imaginary keeps the mind busy ;)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/5/2023 12:41:00 PM

A passionate work that you have penned in this one. I appreciate you dropping by my page with a kind review of my work. Sara

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/5/2023 6:50:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara… :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/5/2023 10:42:00 AM

So a one-night stand turned into romantic love. Delightful.

Fin Chuuk
Date: 2/5/2023 11:29:00 AM

Something like that. Lol.