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Naked Truth

You asked for a naked truth-
I smiled and whispered 
Thought you’d never ask.

So here’s my naked truth, baby. 
I thought I only wanted you for a one night stand 
    and be gone. 
Only I didn’t realize I’d be addicted to you from 
    the instant I felt your lips on mine.
I’ve never felt so much alive and fulfilled  
until your tenderness pervaded into my soul.

              You are it.
           My naked truth.
                The one.
             That I want.
               And need.
                  Tonight.

You smiled and whispered 
Baby, let’s get naked together forever.


Fin Chuuk 
2/4/23

Copyright © Fin Chuuk | Year Posted 2023

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Speaks Volumes Date: 7/20/2023 1:22:00 AM Such love, flows from your poem like water cascading over a waterfall.. Splendid. I miss you. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/29/2023 12:20:00 PM gosh, have I read every single poem of yours? I keep clicking on ones I already commented to! Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/29/2023 7:42:00 PM So kind of you, Andrea. I don’t have much here, I tend to read more of everyone else’s rather than writing. Once I start reading, it’s hard to stop. Again thank you for reading and commenting on my poems. I truly appreciate you. Hugs

William P. Harris Date: 3/14/2023 9:02:00 PM Your heart on paper Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/15/2023 6:46:00 PM The hank you so much, William. :)

Joseph May Date: 3/9/2023 7:41:00 AM Passion shines through in this write, Nicely penned Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 3/9/2023 3:41:00 PM Thank you dear Joseph :)

Caren Krutsinger Date: 2/18/2023 8:11:00 AM “I didn’t realize I would be addicted to you”. Totally romantic! WOW! Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/18/2023 8:45:00 PM I am smiling from this lovely comment :)

Eve Roper Date: 2/16/2023 5:08:00 PM Very heartfelt from the heart of emotions of love. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/18/2023 8:45:00 PM Eve, thank you so much.

Harry Horsman Date: 2/9/2023 9:06:00 PM Love this this, Fin, the surprise of a kiss, love for some, fatal for others, Love the theme, here, and the poetry superb...Harry Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/11/2023 4:28:00 PM Thank you so much dear! ~ Fin

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/8/2023 9:36:00 AM - without a thread ... in Adam's suit ... the truth comes out, Fin - Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/8/2023 10:27:00 AM ;) Thank you beautiful!

Valsa George Date: 2/8/2023 7:20:00 AM Very sensuous and romantic ! Great poem Fin. The one night stand paved way to an eternal longing ! Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/8/2023 10:26:00 AM Thank you so much, Valsa :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/7/2023 7:43:00 PM wow, really nice. I like this a lot. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/8/2023 10:26:00 AM You just made me smile :) Thank you!

Sotto Poet Date: 2/7/2023 5:24:00 PM Fin, you've written a lovely poem. The power of love is not to be underestimated. Well done. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/8/2023 10:24:00 AM Sotto, I appreciate your visit and lovely comment. Thank you :)

Paul Callus Date: 2/7/2023 7:03:00 AM The naked truth could make or break a relationship, Fin. A sort of a sweet-sour delicacy with a lingering sweet taste. ~ Regards // paul Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/7/2023 4:21:00 PM Thank you, Paul, and yes i agree with you.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/7/2023 6:45:00 AM So revealing! Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/7/2023 4:20:00 PM Thank you, Kim :)

Heidi Sands Date: 2/7/2023 5:45:00 AM Powerful. Well written Fin ;) Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/7/2023 4:19:00 PM Thank you, Heidi :)

Panagiota Romios Date: 2/6/2023 7:17:00 PM We can’t hold on to one night standers. But he will haunt your memory forever. Who,k now’s Fin! I wish you the best Panagiota, o Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/6/2023 8:56:00 PM Sometimes complicated, sometimes sweeter :) Thank you so much, Panagiota, and I wish you the very best too. :) ~ Fin

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/6/2023 1:43:00 PM very romantic for the Valentine season, I love it Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/6/2023 8:54:00 PM Such a pleasure to read to you sweet comment, Mystic. Thank you so much :)

Susan Lawrence Date: 2/6/2023 9:00:00 AM Love the passion here Fin . Your heart open and raw … the only way to be ! Welcome to Soup ! Warmly, Susan :) Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/7/2023 4:22:00 PM Thank you so much, Susan :)

Constance La France Date: 2/6/2023 7:46:00 AM Fin, a beautiful romantic write, lovely, well done, one bird lover to another, Constance Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/7/2023 4:22:00 PM Thank you beautiful :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/6/2023 6:00:00 AM Charming poem, Fin. Love is a force to be reckoned with. Well done. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/6/2023 6:11:00 AM It sure does. Thank you so much :)

Charles Messina Date: 2/6/2023 4:04:00 AM Love at first kiss :) Lovely, Fin Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/6/2023 6:11:00 AM I love that, “Love at first kiss.” Thank you :)

Joe Maverick Date: 2/6/2023 12:46:00 AM Explosive stuff here Fin..Specially if its on The other gender..? Either hard and humerous Or soft and tender..' Am I allowed to write such Reality reflections LOL))) Good work though Best wishes and welcome to soup ' Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/6/2023 6:09:00 AM Lol… Thanks for the smile. Joe. Imaginary keeps the mind busy ;)

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/5/2023 12:41:00 PM A passionate work that you have penned in this one. I appreciate you dropping by my page with a kind review of my work. Sara Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/5/2023 6:50:00 PM Thank you so much Sara… :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/5/2023 10:42:00 AM So a one-night stand turned into romantic love. Delightful. Login to Reply Fin Chuuk Date: 2/5/2023 11:29:00 AM Something like that. Lol.