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Naked Tree

Beneath a desolate sky
Intricate simplicity,
Richness of colours in fall
A coppice carpet.

 © Harry J Horsman 2020

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/28/2020 7:53:00 AM

The naked tree forms an aesthetic carpet of rich colored leaves in fall. Beautiful Dodoitsu - beautifully penned Harry. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Emilia James

Date: 11/16/2020 3:36:00 AM

Stunning imagery Harry, congratulations on your well deserved win, Emilia : )

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/15/2020 9:40:00 AM

Autumn is beautiful. Perfectly written, harry :)

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 10/23/2020 4:59:00 PM

I could really picture every line. Good to read your words again. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2020 5:21:00 AM

Wow!! I like this one. Very expressive and descriptive in a simple way. Your presence at my work was complimentary. Sara

John Castellenas

Date: 10/19/2020 4:25:00 AM

Amazing use of words. You said everything necessary for the reader to believe and to see. Thank you Harry for sharing the amazing poem for the days of Fall.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/18/2020 4:01:00 AM

This is amazing xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2020 12:32:00 PM

wow, how did I miss this gem?? I love this, Harry. Belated Congrats too.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2020 3:26:00 PM

superb autumn imagery Harry, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2020 3:16:00 PM

Congratulations Harry on a well deserved win. You win so many of these contest Harry. It reflects how well you write, always consistently conveying great thoughts. I will be stopping by from time to time. God bless you Harry...

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2020 7:42:00 AM

Harry, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem _Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/4/2020 1:16:00 PM

Nicely done Harry. Congratulations! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2020 11:42:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/3/2020 3:47:00 PM

Hello Harry Horseman, although it is autumn the leaves here are slowly falling from the trees. enjoy your evening my friend.

Silent One

Date: 10/3/2020 7:55:00 AM

You described the vulnerability of the tree very well...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 10/2/2020 8:52:00 AM

Gorgeous as the fall season is Harry. I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/30/2020 6:45:00 PM

G’day Harry … our so called evergreen trees drop their leaves all year round, so to amble amongst these rustic carpets would be new to me - thank you Harry - Lindsay

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/30/2020 6:39:00 AM

Gorgeous write from title to that last line :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/30/2020 5:36:00 AM

Great imagery you created, Harry, in just a few words. Reads like a winner.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/30/2020 4:05:00 AM

It does seem that fall has some of those days and it is good to have some color around to help balance that out. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2020 2:46:00 AM

- Excellent described with 14 words, Harry - GL in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/30/2020 1:25:00 AM

Love the autumn imagery Harry, good luck in the contest Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2020 11:08:00 PM

Great autumn scenery. It should do well in the contest. Best of luck. ~~

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/29/2020 8:10:00 PM

What a wealth of beauty you have spread on vast canvas of nature indicating the desolate sky with the touching lines of coppice carpet. One can only imagine by your words the richness of your wonderful poetic art. My good wishes for your excellent entry dear friend Harry. With best wishes...Ravindra K Kapoor

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