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Naked In the Moonlight

~Naked in the Moonlight~ Sleep eludes me once more, I can see the new bright moon The wind howls through the open window The curtains billow in the room. Silently I creep downstairs I bathe in the bright moonlight It’s strange for such bad weather The stars still twinkle every night. The autumn nip is in the air, I am naked as the day I was born Hoping no one is looking out, Because it is now nearly dawn. The wind whips round my naked form Its takes a while to pass In fact I’m now a wind break It can’t get past my ass… © 14/ 09 /2012 ~GG~

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Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/19/2012 6:08:00 AM

You've had me in fits, very funny, but what we're all asking ourselves is, is it true - no don't tell us too much info can be a bad thng :)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/19/2012 3:43:00 AM

The title drew me in, naked has a certain appeal. The poem was great but I LOL at the last line.

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2012 10:24:00 AM

Hehe, Mandy I really didn't expect that ending.. Really enjoyed your wit tonight ;) love Wilma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2012 4:54:00 PM

Interesting touch to this one..Enjoyed the humor..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

Jack Horne

Date: 9/15/2012 2:37:00 PM

I laughed out very loud at the last line - love it

Len Gasun

Date: 9/15/2012 1:48:00 AM

oh, this is a very delightful write which I've almost missed, Mandy. Thanks for sharing and thanks for stopping and shopping at my poetry dept. store!!! luv and hugs:) Leonora

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/14/2012 8:55:00 PM

Too funny. Love it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2012 7:17:00 PM

hahaha. WONDERFUL humor here. LOVE it.

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/14/2012 12:31:00 PM

haha! enjoyed it

Robert Pettit

Date: 9/14/2012 11:56:00 AM

If you go outside, don't lock yourself out. Good poem.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 12:03:00 PM

Perish the thought Robert urgh xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/14/2012 10:24:00 AM

funny!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 12:04:00 PM

Lol thank s sweeite xx

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/14/2012 6:51:00 AM

I was wondering why there was two moons?? hehe

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 12:06:00 PM

You've been peeking lol xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2012 6:19:00 AM

A funny poem Mandy. - It is autumn now, put on some clothes. - Have a lovely weekend - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 12:07:00 PM

We have no money for clothes we have to live on love ha ha xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/14/2012 5:59:00 AM

Ha! This is a glorious write my friend! I am impressed with the exuding nature of this poem! I just love the impressive expressions you used throughout your delightful write Mady! It's been a long time since i've read such a illustrious poem as this one! what a charismatic piece, Great Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 12:08:00 PM

Thanks Russell what a sweet comment bless you xx

Anoucheka Gangabissoon

Date: 9/14/2012 5:40:00 AM

:) Wonderful.....Enjoyed reading!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 12:09:00 PM

awh thank you Anoucheka xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/14/2012 5:10:00 AM

what the hell would we do without you dear lady, here i am, reading this wonderful poems, pictures of illusions rushing through my head. then that last line: wow i cracked up, here i am going to the dentist petrified, with tears rolling down my face.. you're a gem sweet lady

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl
Date: 9/14/2012 5:12:00 AM

And back at you sweetie, I'll come and hold your hand if you want at the dentist I am very good at that xx