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Naked Dreams

Fifty years old and back in high school
Standing here naked like a total fool
No one seems to care
That I am totally bare
Not noticing me is much more uncool

Copyright © Joe Flach | Year Posted 2010

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 26, 2010 at 12:11 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem Joe in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol

Gerard Keogh Jr.

July 25, 2010 at 6:50 PM

I know the feeling. " Here I Am!" What? Nothing?! Thank you for picking my little piece for your top 10. It is a honor that I humbly accept , given yoiur facility in the humoir/ limerick form. Thank you, Gerard.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 23, 2010 at 9:28 AM

Congrats Joe on your big win in John's contest with this original and unique ..creative write .. enjoy another biggie..with luv..

Andrea Dietrich

July 22, 2010 at 9:53 PM

Yes, I would agree with that, JOe. What a nightmare. Congratulations. (I went to a HS reunion after 50, almost like a bad dream too, seeing how everyone changed!) Luv, andrea

Barbara Gorelick

July 22, 2010 at 9:28 PM

My high school dream is forgetting my locker combination ..time after time.. congrats on your win with this one..Bg

July 22, 2010 at 9:23 PM

Congratulations, Joe. I dream about Highschool too, But I can't find my class room. Smile. Agape, Moses

July 22, 2010 at 9:19 PM

lCongraltulations on your great limerick and your win. Love, joyce

Francine Roberts

July 21, 2010 at 8:09 PM

very good limerick, loved it , good luck in the contest

July 21, 2010 at 7:49 PM

Wow so true! Wonderful limerick Joe, I'm sure it'll place well!~Tirzah~

July 21, 2010 at 7:14 PM

That was my dream too, only I went to work and was very upset that no one paid attention to me. But being fifty is even funnier. Great write, I enjoyed the write. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

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