Nacht Musik

My closed eyes have crashed
against an image;
I am a boat moored to a storm.
I keep a notebook on the nightstand,
pencil at hand – life-rafts for thoughts.

A flock of crows
all take off at once – they clatter – it’s musical;
1t’s an hour-long symphony
played in a single moment,
you hear it all but can’t separate the wing-beats.	

My Scots grandmother (a natural born Celt),
would talk to me in her Highland tongue;
sounds so beautiful that my brain
would stop deciphering or even thinking.
I can’t now remember her wry wisdom,
not a thing, 
I just recall the chanting-chimes.

Mozart must have leapt from his bed often.
I wonder did he stumble around lighting candles,
cursing the dark until he found his keyboard?
Did he lay his sleepy forehead on that forte-piano
willing himself to recall the bitsy songs
of Pipistrelle bats?

My head swings from the pillow.
If I could only reach that pencil,
but it has moved-on,
to a place where Gaelic grannies,
and jet-black crows wait
to enter some other dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 7:25 AM
...and here I thought "nacht musik" was your grandmother's thick accent ;),
Ashford Avatar
February 11, 2020 at 9:19 AM
LOL what a soupy though!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Very cool piece. Some delicious phrasing. Yummy soup, thank you!
Ashford Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Thanks Maureen. LOL like 'yummy soup'.
Ferdous Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 11:33 AM
Have a nice day. I could not decipher the title, what does it mean? To my understanding , this is a free verse poem with five stanzas in it, with a lot of mood swings there. Do you have anything else to add to better the understanding? The other day I was puzzled with a Carpe diem poem format with free verse. I still need to learn a lot, that is the core thing. Thanks.
Ashford Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 1:20 PM
Hi Tamanna, 'Nacht Musik' is German for - night music. It is a play on Mozart's Eine Kleine Nacht Music. Trans: A Little Night Music. Best
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