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Nab New Grails-Infinitian

Nab New Grails Learn from life each deed friends sweet myrrhs Earn love and trust by less wants Art of life an awed path Reach out to the weak Not now then when? In rough times Nab new Grails October11, 2015 Contest: Infinitian Sponsor: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2015 3:44:00 PM

this is nice, Balveen. but you are gonna get docked for trying to separate friendships and awesome into two separate words! She is a strict judge. Try to change the words a bit. I know you can do it!!

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/13/2015 8:01:00 PM

Andrea, can awe-some be used with a hyphen?

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/13/2015 7:57:00 PM

Ok! I'll do that!

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/11/2015 8:10:00 PM

Balveen, you did a good job!Best of luck in the contest:-)Alexis

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/11/2015 8:13:00 PM

Thanks Alexis! It was tough! Hope Charlotte knows it!! Love, Balveen

Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2015 9:35:00 AM

Balveen, this is beautiful and not easy to find those one syllable words, well done 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, pasta ...

Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/11/2015 8:07:00 PM

Wings, it wasn't easy! I first made a blunder of the same sylabble but fewer words until I was corrected. Then I removed it from the contest and re-wrote this one. Thanks for visiting and appreciating my poem! Love