Mystic Moon


Oh how she blazes more daring
than midsummer, flitting as a woman
whose spirit enters inside my pores
on a clear skyline. Like the glaze
she was born from, Mystic Moon thrusts
her citrine arms fluid, wild, loving;


her feverish way of tasting her own moment
highlighting the stencils of open light;
as she gleams, oh so lusciously!.




Theme #5--The Moon Contest
sponsored by SKAT
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
January 26, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Nette, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -
Godwin Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 7:49 PM
your poem moves me - I am ready to do my own gypsy dance. I love how you take words to their deepest nuance and easily volley them into image. There is no one like you ... CayCay
Devnath  Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:03 PM
Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl
A. Sharma Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 4:12 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Nette!
A  Avatar
January 13, 2016 at 10:38 PM
Nette, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
Nance Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Spectacular, wonderful win sweetie:)
Arowolo Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 12:38 PM
Wonderful and Intriguing piece,Nette..Congrats on your lovely win...
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 11:27 PM
Amazing n sweet write on moon Nette!congrats on top place win!
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:07 PM
wowowow, imagery galore in this beauty. BIG congratulations on this win, Nette. I am honored to share the placement with you and the others.
Chutani Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:29 PM
Nette, feel like swallowing all the lusciousness you so fluently penned. congrats. Mohan
Kendrick Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 4:19 PM
Loved the repeated line & the personification oh moon goddess ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 3:35 PM
Congrats my lovely friend for your superb win. Loved always,bl
Merritt Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Cherries, bouquets and wine... I love this imagery for it allows me to recall similar moments long passed. Thank you, and congratulations !
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:32 PM
amazing imagery Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:48 PM
Beautifully said Nette. You helped us see her too.
Roberts Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 12:42 PM
congrats on making the winners list nette. lovely as usual
Hamilton Avatar
August 24, 2014 at 1:02 AM
so lovely Nette I love the moon too in all her phases great pen hugs
Enriquez Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Dear Nette: Which is more lovely? The moon or your moon verses? Both are mystic! Enjoyed this write. All the best then, Leon.
Enriquez Avatar
August 21, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Dear Nette: Yikes my clever iPad has rendered the moon to "mom". What a sneaky device! ha-ha-ha. Or was it my bad typo? Anyway, just wanted to correct my error. Leon
Posey Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:33 PM
Great imagery..... deserves high marks... You really know how to create a masterpiece..... Love Ya ...... Jake
Vaso Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 8:31 PM
The imagery is so beautiful, When I read this I imagine someone reading it aloud to me, somehow as I read this it makes this seem even more spectacular.
Austin Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:37 PM
Feverish and colorful. This is Nette's way. Always a joy. Thanks for reading my stuff. LOve, daver
Trifiatis Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:36 AM
Dear Nette, reading this fabulous poem brings to mind the magic of the full moon rise that I observed and taped here in Greece. Your poetry surpasses even the beauty of the moon herself as adorned with her regalia establishes her dominion on the lonely sky! Enjoyed it very much! A seven is a must! Good luck, if ever you need one! Fantastic!
Gonza Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 2:08 PM
A perfect night, brought me an outpouring of delight. Opening and ending this majestic poem in repeats was creative, Nette
A. Sharma Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Wonderful imagery Nette! U ought to be a painter ! Perfect write, gl in contest!
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