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Mystic Moon

She gleams lusciously waking evening with melon hues, tendrils of roasted flames drip of crystal orange sensation. And so, in the glide of August nestling on cherries, bouquets, and wine--- I relish Mystic Moon’s tones bursting into a luster of desire, a sheer madness on wheat fields near and far… Oh how she blazes more daring than midsummer, flitting as a woman whose spirit enters inside my pores on a clear skyline. Like the glaze she was born from, Mystic Moon thrusts her citrine arms fluid, wild, loving; her feverish way of tasting her own moment highlighting the stencils of open light; as she gleams, oh so lusciously!. Theme #5--The Moon Contest sponsored by SKAT

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Date: 1/26/2016 9:38:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:49:00 PM
your poem moves me - I am ready to do my own gypsy dance. I love how you take words to their deepest nuance and easily volley them into image. There is no one like you ... CayCay
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:03:00 PM
Congrats my lovely friend on your win. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/14/2016 4:12:00 AM
Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Nette!
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Date: 1/13/2016 10:38:00 PM
Nette, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT**
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Date: 9/3/2014 5:07:00 PM
Spectacular, wonderful win sweetie:)
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Date: 8/31/2014 12:38:00 PM
Wonderful and Intriguing piece,Nette..Congrats on your lovely win...
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Date: 8/30/2014 11:27:00 PM
Amazing n sweet write on moon Nette!congrats on top place win!
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Date: 8/30/2014 8:07:00 PM
wowowow, imagery galore in this beauty. BIG congratulations on this win, Nette. I am honored to share the placement with you and the others.
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Date: 8/30/2014 7:29:00 PM
Nette, feel like swallowing all the lusciousness you so fluently penned. congrats. Mohan
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:48:00 PM
Prodigious winner..Way to go..Sara
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:19:00 PM
Loved the repeated line & the personification oh moon goddess ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/30/2014 3:35:00 PM
Congrats my lovely friend for your superb win. Loved always,bl
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Date: 8/30/2014 3:12:00 PM
Cherries, bouquets and wine... I love this imagery for it allows me to recall similar moments long passed. Thank you, and congratulations !
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Date: 8/30/2014 1:32:00 PM
amazing imagery Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:48:00 PM
Beautifully said Nette. You helped us see her too.
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Date: 8/30/2014 12:42:00 PM
congrats on making the winners list nette. lovely as usual
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Date: 8/24/2014 1:02:00 AM
so lovely Nette I love the moon too in all her phases great pen hugs
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Date: 8/21/2014 11:15:00 AM
Dear Nette: Which is more lovely? The moon or your moon verses? Both are mystic! Enjoyed this write. All the best then, Leon.
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Date: 8/21/2014 11:17:00 AM
Dear Nette: Yikes my clever iPad has rendered the moon to "mom". What a sneaky device! ha-ha-ha. Or was it my bad typo? Anyway, just wanted to correct my error. Leon
Date: 8/16/2014 10:33:00 PM
Great imagery..... deserves high marks... You really know how to create a masterpiece..... Love Ya ...... Jake
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Date: 8/16/2014 8:31:00 PM
The imagery is so beautiful, When I read this I imagine someone reading it aloud to me, somehow as I read this it makes this seem even more spectacular.
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Date: 8/16/2014 1:37:00 PM
Feverish and colorful. This is Nette's way. Always a joy. Thanks for reading my stuff. LOve, daver
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Date: 8/16/2014 5:36:00 AM
Dear Nette, reading this fabulous poem brings to mind the magic of the full moon rise that I observed and taped here in Greece. Your poetry surpasses even the beauty of the moon herself as adorned with her regalia establishes her dominion on the lonely sky! Enjoyed it very much! A seven is a must! Good luck, if ever you need one! Fantastic!
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Date: 8/15/2014 2:08:00 PM
A perfect night, brought me an outpouring of delight. Opening and ending this majestic poem in repeats was creative, Nette
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Date: 8/15/2014 12:42:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Nette! U ought to be a painter ! Perfect write, gl in contest!
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