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Mystic Man

An angry cloud hurls at him heavy drops of water, and lightning hurls fiery balls; a coin into his old tin rarely plops, and an apple from a passing hand – falls, while a line or two, he hastily scrawls. The stray dogs’ twisted tails busily dance seeing this curious man's mystic trance whereas one or two wonder, what he rhymes. A passing teen at his writing - does glance And hears the rhymes that the man slyly chimes.
10 syllables in each line ( Ref: https://www.howmanysyllables.com) Sept. 26, 2020 DIZAIN Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Emile Pinet

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Date: 9/28/2020 12:07:00 PM
- A great poetic poem, Newton ... it will give you a great win in the contest, best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2020 12:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for your kind read and the sweet comment!!
Date: 9/28/2020 2:37:00 AM
Hello, Newton. Absolutely marvellous verse. You inserted so much thoughtfulness and sad imagery.... This will be a deserved Winner. Song Mr. Wendell by Arrested Development (I only noticed the lyrics in recent time) also pertains to this terrible topic of homelessness. You express it well. I love that the mystic man recites his poems to earn money.!
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Date: 9/28/2020 11:59:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sigrid, for this immensely great comment!!
Date: 9/27/2020 10:31:00 AM
for some reason I was thinking of Mr. Bojangles when I read this!
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Date: 9/27/2020 1:06:00 PM
Thank you so much for this great comment with a reference, Andrea!!

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