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Mystery of the Light

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To the music of The Music Of the Night from Phantom Of The Opera

Moon light harkens, Seeking new dimensions... Stardust glistens, while Unmasking true intentions... Awakening emotions, Inspiring deep devotion... Lightly, proudly, Love unveils its pleasure... Embrace it, taste it, Measuring such treasure... Cast your pains away With clear voice that greats the day, Kneel and humbly pray, Raise the curtain of the night And walk into the mystery of the light... Lift your head And walk away from Shrouded fears... Turn aside Of the life You've lived before... In your heart Seek one thought Of evermore... And you'll know Him as you've never Known before... Warmly, lightly, The brightness will astound you... Sense it, hear it Wrap its arms around you... Let your faith be shown- From the brightness that- You know will lead to sight... Forever walking with The mystery of the light... Phantom Lyrics Contest Sponsored by The Seeker 11/15/2016

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/4/2017 8:30:00 PM

Charlie, beautiful and inspirational. A lovely spiritual write with amazing lyrics. Such a smooth flow, a pleasure to read. Enjoyed!

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/5/2017 7:50:00 AM

So very nice of you to say Susan, thank you very much...

Arlene Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 2:52:00 PM

Beautifully inspirational my friend!..

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/17/2017 8:59:00 PM

So glad you think so Arlene, thank you...

Peter Dome

Date: 1/7/2017 5:49:00 AM

Such a delight to read your excellent work. Such talent. Well done. Pete.

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/7/2017 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Peter...

Augustus Black

Date: 1/2/2017 10:27:00 AM

Ah! So wonderful poem. Wow a very unique poem from the very talented one. While reading this I felt as if a door of heaven is being opened and casting its light upon the earth for those who want walk in the right way. I think every individual should need to understand the mystery of the light. Great poem. I personally like sitting under the moon light. 7

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/2/2017 11:22:00 AM

Thank you again Augustus, you are very kind...

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/16/2016 6:08:00 AM

Profound work, Charlie. Congrats on your win.

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/16/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thanks Afzal...

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 12/14/2016 11:16:00 AM

Great flow and excitement to this piece. I get the sense you wrote it a white-hot speed! Thank you for stopping by. Congratulations on your win. Best to you in your writing endeavors./ M

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/14/2016 11:42:00 AM

Thank you Maurice, keep us in your humor...

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/12/2016 2:33:00 PM

Astounding piece my friend. Depth , truth and light within this poem are all massive... Adding to my fav list...

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/12/2016 8:12:00 PM

Thank you for your inspiration Robert, your work never ceases to do just that....

John Hamilton

Date: 12/9/2016 10:14:00 AM

Very moving lyric could really hear this in my head, congrats on a fine placement!

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/9/2016 11:18:00 AM

Thanks John, hope you enjoyed it...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2016 6:23:00 PM

wow, I can see how this would have won in a contest. A wonderfully spiritual poem on the theme of LOVE (belated congrats)

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/8/2016 7:35:00 PM

Thank you Andrea...

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2016 6:11:00 PM

Excellent lyrics that mirror the theme, Charlie. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/7/2016 8:05:00 PM

Thanks Sandra...

Miranda Keuter

Date: 12/2/2016 5:32:00 PM

Congratulations Charlie... Kind regards Miranda

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/2/2016 8:31:00 PM

Thank you Miranda...

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/1/2016 7:06:00 AM

Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 11:56:00 PM

Thank you Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/1/2016 6:56:00 AM

Lovely, Charlie! Congrats,

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 11:55:00 PM

Thank you Kim...

Eve Roper

Date: 11/30/2016 11:18:00 PM

Charlie, congratulations on your win :-) Eve

Charlie Smith
Date: 12/1/2016 12:18:00 AM

Thank you Eve...

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/30/2016 7:49:00 PM

I love this Charlie !!! It is so emotional and one can grasp the mystery and the despair of unrequited love !! Great work !! Congratulations to you !!

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/30/2016 9:44:00 PM

Thank you Carrie...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/27/2016 12:21:00 PM

I have read many phantom entries this day and this is one of the few I heard sung in my head. The cadence of Phantom of the Opera is there, but doesn't dominate or alienate, but blends with other lines in song that rocks that opera, Charlie. I say, WOW and that I had a great time reading your entry ... CayCay

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/27/2016 8:03:00 PM

Thanks for your kind note CayCay, I appreciate your visit...

Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/27/2016 7:00:00 AM

Hi Charlie. High time that i visit your poems. This one you turned the darkness into light..I am not sure old Andrew Lloyd Weber would agree. Good luck with the contest

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/27/2016 8:01:00 PM

I so enjoyed your visit Jannie, thank you...

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/26/2016 9:09:00 PM

Beautiful poem, I sense a lot of philosophy inside these words!

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/27/2016 6:37:00 AM

I'd hope more beauty than philosophy, thanks Arthur...

Probir Gupta

Date: 11/22/2016 12:11:00 AM

Lovely poem of light in black night ... Steeped in poetic spirit ...

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/22/2016 9:23:00 AM

Thank you Probir...

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/20/2016 1:09:00 PM

Hello Charlie, Dropping by to read your latest here. You've not disappointed. These quite wondrous lyrics melds excellently with the theme. Brilliantly rendered my friend. SEVEN and A FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Charlie Smith
Date: 11/20/2016 8:30:00 PM

Thank you Gary...