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To the music of The Music Of the Night from Phantom Of The Opera

 

Mystery of the Light

Moon light harkens,
     Seeking new dimensions...
     Stardust glistens, while
     Unmasking true intentions...
     Awakening emotions,
     Inspiring deep devotion...
     Lightly, proudly,
     Love unveils its pleasure...
     Embrace it, taste it,
     Measuring such treasure...
     Cast your pains away
     With clear voice that greats the day,
     Kneel and humbly pray,
     Raise the curtain of the night
     And walk into the mystery of the light...
     Lift your head
     And walk away from
     Shrouded fears...
     Turn aside
     Of the life 
     You've lived before...
     In your heart
     Seek one thought 
     Of evermore...
     And you'll know
     Him as you've never
     Known before...
     Warmly, lightly,
     The brightness will astound you...
     Sense it, hear it
     Wrap its arms around you...
     Let your faith be shown-
     From the brightness that-
     You know will lead to sight...
     Forever walking with
     The mystery of the light...

     Phantom Lyrics Contest
     Sponsored by The Seeker
     11/15/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Ashley Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Charlie, beautiful and inspirational. A lovely spiritual write with amazing lyrics. Such a smooth flow, a pleasure to read. Enjoyed!
Smith Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 7:50 AM
So very nice of you to say Susan, thank you very much...
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Beautifully inspirational my friend!..
Smith Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 8:59 PM
So glad you think so Arlene, thank you...
Dome Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Such a delight to read your excellent work. Such talent. Well done. Pete.
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2017 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Peter...
Black Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Ah! So wonderful poem. Wow a very unique poem from the very talented one. While reading this I felt as if a door of heaven is being opened and casting its light upon the earth for those who want walk in the right way. I think every individual should need to understand the mystery of the light. Great poem. I personally like sitting under the moon light. 7
Smith Avatar
January 2, 2017 at 11:22 AM
Thank you again Augustus, you are very kind...
Nusker Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 6:08 AM
Profound work, Charlie. Congrats on your win.
Smith Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 12:06 PM
Thanks Afzal...
Rigoler Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 11:16 AM
Great flow and excitement to this piece. I get the sense you wrote it a white-hot speed! Thank you for stopping by. Congratulations on your win. Best to you in your writing endeavors./ M
Smith Avatar
December 14, 2016 at 11:42 AM
Thank you Maurice, keep us in your humor...
Lindley Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 2:33 PM
Astounding piece my friend. Depth , truth and light within this poem are all massive... Adding to my fav list...
Smith Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Thank you for your inspiration Robert, your work never ceases to do just that....
Hamilton Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Very moving lyric could really hear this in my head, congrats on a fine placement!
Smith Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thanks John, hope you enjoyed it...
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 6:23 PM
wow, I can see how this would have won in a contest. A wonderfully spiritual poem on the theme of LOVE (belated congrats)
Smith Avatar
December 8, 2016 at 7:35 PM
Thank you Andrea...
Haight Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 6:11 PM
Excellent lyrics that mirror the theme, Charlie. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra
Smith Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 8:05 PM
Thanks Sandra...
Keuter Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Congratulations Charlie... Kind regards Miranda
Smith Avatar
December 2, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Thank you Miranda...
Y. Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 7:06 AM
Hi Charlie, Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:56 PM
Thank you Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 6:56 AM
Lovely, Charlie! Congrats,
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Thank you Kim...
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Charlie, congratulations on your win :-) Eve
Smith Avatar
December 1, 2016 at 12:18 AM
Thank you Eve...
Richards Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 7:49 PM
I love this Charlie !!! It is so emotional and one can grasp the mystery and the despair of unrequited love !! Great work !! Congratulations to you !!
Smith Avatar
November 30, 2016 at 9:44 PM
Thank you Carrie...
Godwin Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 12:21 PM
I have read many phantom entries this day and this is one of the few I heard sung in my head. The cadence of Phantom of the Opera is there, but doesn't dominate or alienate, but blends with other lines in song that rocks that opera, Charlie. I say, WOW and that I had a great time reading your entry ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Thanks for your kind note CayCay, I appreciate your visit...
Breedt Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 7:00 AM
Hi Charlie. High time that i visit your poems. This one you turned the darkness into light..I am not sure old Andrew Lloyd Weber would agree. Good luck with the contest
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 8:01 PM
I so enjoyed your visit Jannie, thank you...
Vaso Avatar
November 26, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Beautiful poem, I sense a lot of philosophy inside these words!
Smith Avatar
November 27, 2016 at 6:37 AM
I'd hope more beauty than philosophy, thanks Arthur...
Gupta Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 12:11 AM
Lovely poem of light in black night ... Steeped in poetic spirit ...
Smith Avatar
November 22, 2016 at 9:23 AM
Thank you Probir...
Bateman Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Hello Charlie, Dropping by to read your latest here. You've not disappointed. These quite wondrous lyrics melds excellently with the theme. Brilliantly rendered my friend. SEVEN and A FAV!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Smith Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Thank you Gary...
Grasso Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 9:14 AM
It will take truly beautiful music to stand tall with this lovely poem! Good luck in the contest with this sure winner, Charlie. ...Fran
Smith Avatar
November 20, 2016 at 8:29 PM
Thank you Fran...
P  Avatar
November 18, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Captures the theme perfectly. First-rate lyrics. Good luck with the contest Charlie.
Smith Avatar
November 19, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Thank you Paloma...
Wanter Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:41 PM
So beautiful and inspirational!
Smith Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:33 AM
Thank you Sunlite...
B. Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 5:36 PM
Lovely lyric:)
Smith Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Thank you Carol...
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Very nice one Charlie :)
Smith Avatar
November 16, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Thanks Heidi...
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