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Mystery Garden

After buttercups came daisies, exquisite floating garnet hibiscus, iris, jasmine, kooky little marigolds, nasturshums, orchids, petunias, roses, sunflowers,trailing varicolored wisteria, xerophites, and yellow zinnias.

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James Fraser

Date: 7/2/2009 4:08:00 PM

Top of the class with this ABC Barbara>>James

Lawrence Ingle

Date: 12/20/2008 2:14:00 PM

Where in the heck is my mater plants gonna grow with all them there pretty flowers grabbing all the heavenly sunshine and rain?....Great writing....Lawrence in Lou. Ky.

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/8/2008 9:27:00 AM

What a fantastic garden! An amazing ABC! So well done! I have not yet tried to do one, but you give me inspiration. Maybe I'll find the courage soon! ~Juliane

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/7/2008 5:28:00 PM

Dear Barbara, I am so impressed with this POEM that I looked at all YOUR POEMS, looking for another ABC form but none exist Tell YOU What YOU write another ABC POEM and I will write a POEM of YOUR choice of Form and YOU choose TOPIC. Thank-you for YOUR Gracious comments on my POETRY YOURS ALWAYS...HG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 12/7/2008 5:52:00 AM

Very clever and full of vivid beauty. Wonderful write. Love Robin

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 12/7/2008 3:41:00 AM

I agree, a very clever way to do ABC, whic is very hard! Well done, and beautiful, I can smell this poem! Love, Kristin

John Rhinem

Date: 12/7/2008 2:03:00 AM

I am not to hip to the different stlyes of writings in regards to poetic forms? I have never felt the need nor desire, to fit the mainstream formats of certain things within the world!? But, I know beauty when I see it! And, this write here dear Barbara, is filled with beauty, reflecting upon a heart I believe, that is very lovely indeed!~"Wonderful Write Dear~Love Always, John!"~"Happy Holidays!:)

Brian Strand

Date: 12/7/2008 12:52:00 AM

Very clever Barbara.rgds Brian & thanks for youralways welcome comments

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 12/6/2008 11:22:00 PM

Dear Barbara, Excellent Write I have all kinds of flowers around my cabin find the abc form very hard to do, YOU have used it Exquisitely Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments on my writes LOVEYOUr pen YOUR POETRYSOUP Friend ALWAYS...HG

Michael Torres

Date: 12/6/2008 4:42:00 PM

Barb my flower girl. Wow what a passion you have for these beautiful plants and flower's. Love this and thank you for your appreciated comments. Michael

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/6/2008 3:07:00 PM

I was so pleased to see that you had written an ABC, and this is really great. Great subject and well executed. Love, Nigel

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/6/2008 2:26:00 PM

Wow! Such a clever way to do an ABC! So well done and I love the title too! Love, shar