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Remembering the springtime poppies that populated the valley beneath

the Franklin Mountains in El Paso, Texas

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ pale poppy’s mystery: her dark Mardi Gras heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 4/18/2024 9:28:00 AM
Small words shouts the loudest.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/18/2024 4:45:00 PM
I agree...short words and brevity can so easily be heard. have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 4/17/2024 12:19:00 PM
I really liked this piece of yours- an original and deep monoku of few words
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/18/2024 4:45:00 PM
awww, thank you, Paige. Always grateful for your encouragement. Have a pleasant evening, sara

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