Mysterious Night

Grayish clouds linger Eerie night in horizon Causing goosebumps

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Jean Murray

Date: 8/9/2017 9:22:00 AM

Lovely haiku Nayda.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/8/2017 8:53:00 PM

Love this, Nayda, I wrote one , but was too late. I will submit at a later time so can add to it..~*

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/8/2017 9:53:00 PM

Thank you Eve.

Curtis Johnson

Date: 8/2/2017 10:18:00 AM

These three lines unfold some of my childhood fears of storms. I feel that 'mystical night'.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/2/2017 3:22:00 PM

Thank you Curtis.

Curtis Johnson

Date: 8/2/2017 10:14:00 AM

Placement. Thanks for the opportunity

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/2/2017 3:25:00 PM

You are welcome Curtis.

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/2/2017 5:09:00 AM

A great haiku, fitting a mysterious night for sure! :)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/2/2017 3:22:00 PM

Indeed Heidi. Thank you.

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/2/2017 4:54:00 AM

Goosebumps it is lol...great haiku Nayda...^WW^

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/2/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thank you WW.