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Mysterious Jordan

 Written: June 17, 2023 Whatever Happened To "Jordan" Poetry Contest Miranda Hawley ______________________________________________________________ Whatever happened to Jordan, His name in quotes, a mystery to all, A mischievous kid, a bit of a stinker, But with a golden heart that stood tall. Then one day, he vanished without a trace. Leaving behind a trail of mystery and disgrace, His family and friends searched everywhere. But Jordan was nowhere—not a single hair. But his family never gave up hope. Searching for him, they would never mope, They put up posters and spread the word. Hoping that someone might have heard. Years went by, and hope grew thin. Until one day, a knock at the door did begin. It was Jordan, looking a little worse for wear. But sentient and well, standing right there. He told of his travels faraway and wide, Of the people he met, and the things he tried, He had found his calling, in an afar-off land, And was taken by a UFO for a time trip stand.

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Date: 7/16/2023 3:16:00 AM
Back with Congratulations for a well earned win. This poem has everything. Loved it.
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Date: 7/15/2023 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I like the fact that the family kept looking for him, that shows a strong commitment. I also like the UFO ending.
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Date: 6/18/2023 4:49:00 AM
I like your story, my friend. Splendid take on the contest theme. Best to you.
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Date: 6/17/2023 11:33:00 PM
There are some such people who disappear all of a sudden and then after many years mysteriously making a sudden appearance . Poems are at your finger tips my friend. Any time you can call them at will. GREAT!
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Date: 6/17/2023 9:34:00 PM
Great way to travel on a UFO.. Love the write my friend well said and written. Many blessings my friend. PS need to hear from you.... hugs eve
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Date: 6/17/2023 7:07:00 PM
Stll laughing. Your uniqueness shines through !. I invisiaged a cult or a missionary in a far flung place, but that was a complete surprise. Well written like a best "who done it" kept the reader guessing til the end. BOL in the Miranda's contest.
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