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Mysteries of the Abandoned

Breathe deeply my legacy, My mysterious abandonments My asylums of the dead. So many forgotten dwellings Now boarded up and cold. I once wore them and shed them Like snakeskins. All these mental spaces, What was their meaning? What visitations did I encounter? So many giant houses of horror, Gothic crumbling, rotting mansions of ruin. There, I was imprisoned In solitary confinement self-imposed, Like a rodent feeding on garbage, I never thought to look beyond. I breathe deeply into this meager legacy. Now all these houses remain idle. Why I occupied them, I will never know. In my final chapter, I see, Everything was empty.

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Date: 12/27/2023 8:39:00 AM
Hello Thomas, Quite an intriguing metaphor - abandonments - conveying an exterior and interior reality. From "boarded up...forgotten dwellings" to "solitary confinements" an inner isolation; you've caught a quandry of existence. Why do we occupy such places, abandoned and forlorn? Such thoughtful writing to engage the reader fully. Be well. Brian
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Thomas Wells
Date: 12/29/2023 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Brian! Indeed, your description captures the poem's message. It is one of the darker poems I have ever written. I always appreciate your insights. Happy holidays to you and your family. :-)

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