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Myrtle the Turtle

Myrtle the Turtle There once was a turtle named Myrtle. She could speed through a maze and climb a hurdle. While she was small, she was a friend to all. And remained safe from a kitchen overhaul. Years passed as she raced for many children. Through mazes designed in childlike fashion. Lined up building blocks, her corridor defined. Faster than all the others, her speediness shined. She heard cheering children as she plodded fast. Quicker than lightening our childhood flew past. Playing on the floor so much laughter roaring. A turtle named Myrtle beget years of adoring. But then the day came when she was big and fat. Myrtle somehow disappeared; imagine that! Fear and distraught brought a terrible rouse. Frantically we searched running house to house. Never discovered though we searched with quickstep. Three children sat crying on their front porch step. We thought she had been taken to become turtle soup! It was a devastating day for the turtle-loving group. Surprisingly, later, in a nearby pond Where a neighborhood boy with our playmate did abscond. We saw Myrtle, our turtle, and her baby turtles, too. She had escaped turtle soup and made freedom's debut. © August 3, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Date: 8/16/2010 8:40:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Dane
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:20:00 PM
Congrats to you AND to Myrtle. GREAT win, Dane Ann. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 9:14:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in (Destroyer((Poet's contest "Turtle Soup". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:31:00 AM
cute poem, congrats on the win!
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Date: 8/8/2010 7:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win from a Mutant Ninja Turtle mom 3rd place :)
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:43:00 PM
cdongrats Dane...I loved this contest and your entry BG
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Date: 8/8/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this fine write..Sara
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Date: 8/8/2010 9:36:00 AM
cute one, congrats on your second place finish
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:50:00 AM
Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in P.D.'s turtle contest with this wonderful piece entered.. very entertaining read ..enjoy my friend.. happy Sunday..with luv..
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Date: 8/8/2010 6:06:00 AM
oh whew, WHEW for Myrtle the turtle!! I remember how my sister lost her 2 turtles before then I dunno a couple of years went by when we saw one of the turtles appear again! and it grew really big too! Super congrats on your 2nd place win Dane :) enjoyed this one-- nikko :)
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Date: 8/8/2010 5:19:00 AM
I wonder how many Turtles will have been saved in the coming writes I read. I don't think many. Wonderful poem Dane Ann, congrats on your fine win in PD's contest >> James
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Date: 8/8/2010 12:19:00 AM
congratulations!! Dane, enjoyed your nn- soup turtle,..p.d.
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Date: 8/4/2010 12:10:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Dane Ann. Please continue you keep your pen flowing. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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