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My Worst Poem -September Comes-W

September comes Makes me a year older I take colours of The falling leaves In my autumnal days. See the mid-night moon Of September sky. How we fornicated Till the early hours of October Sun. ====================== Ninth place in the contest The poem was originally posted on October'30, 2005 on the PS Contest: My Worst Ever poem sponsored by destroyer)) Poet

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Date: 12/1/2010 4:26:00 PM
Not bad for a worst poem. Thanks Dr. for reading my poems. Vince
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:39:00 AM
one word made this your worst poems. fornicated. without it it could have been a beautiful piece. jhl
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:08:00 PM
magical, dr. ram.. best of luck in PD's contest.. i thank you for your greetings for my win in halloween's past... have a swell weekend! warmest, nette
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Date: 11/20/2010 4:50:00 PM
Great verse Dr Ram... nice comment on my Sydney ... war is awful people die murder possible of you and i nasty world ......Don
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Date: 11/20/2010 6:17:00 AM
thanks for your kind comments on my poem The Lords mercy. he just never fails us whatever situation we are in he pulls through every single time. and this isa great poem.
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Date: 11/19/2010 3:07:00 PM
Liked this one very much...I am glad that I chose it to read this eve...I appreciate your kind comments on my work.."Ode To Joy Of The Different Seasons"..Sara
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:38:00 AM
Good luck my friend in the contest..enjoyed your work today...
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Date: 11/19/2010 7:12:00 AM
The most prolific pen of men, and still holding good. How is my learned friend today? All the best in the contest, Ram.
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:28:00 PM
Does your birthday fall on September, Nice lines :-)
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:35:00 PM
Dr Ram ... I was very keen on entering your contest since I missed out last time ..... Luv/best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:16:00 PM
Good, day Dr. Ram not reading just yet. Here only to say hello to my entry.. Thanks for the contest support,..p.d.
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Date: 11/18/2010 4:01:00 PM
Hello Dr. Mehta, How true your words are, funny also. I enjoy your work so very much. Thank you for re-submitting this it is a Gem Your always so kind to me in your comments As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/18/2010 2:29:00 PM
A sensitive write Dr. Ram.. lovely visuals painted from your gifted pen.. two lovely months to write about my friend.. u have done so well.. enjoyed with luv.. and thankxxx for your wonderful comments today my friend with luv..
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