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Soft, sweet words lay dormant Awaiting that special moment When I can pull them out of their closet Press them with the heated iron And lie them in a row, like pearls Connected only by a chain of sterling Silver, organizing each sacred dream Whispers of nouns, verbs and adjectives There amid sentences quite sensible And some that long to be finished with Some bright, vivid, colorful verses Filled with phenomenal expressions While others seem more like questions With short, pleasing answers there, too Limericks sing from the rhythms found here Amid some of the better choruses I hint at Surviving the editor’s pen when it’s winning Erasing saccharine visions of fancies and fantasy Feelings that would never become realities Even though they buzz through my history Like a bumble bee searching for nectar in me Sonnets sound out from the depths of my pen Sweating with beads of salt that actually reveals The truth of their imagination and foresight Admissions of genuine devotion alive within Sharing a promise of what should be coming If the world will only open its eyes and awaken The joy found inside a silky, burning poem Odes cry out to be written down and read By someone who knows what is going on in my head Perhaps a sensitive soul who can see the blushes Happening when I spew out romantic verses Or paint a beautiful sunset across the mountains So tender and sensual, alive to my poetry in ways That open up the doors to the backstreets of my mind September 23, 2019 In the backstreets of my mind Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 9/30/2019 11:57:00 AM
This poem gave me chills Regina because I recognize a bit if my own thoughts in your words. What an amazing reflection of what makes you you! I love this expressive piece and I am putting it into my Faves! I am very happy to see it awarded a First Placement, and rightly so! Congratulations my friend. xxoo
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Date: 9/27/2019 3:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top winning poem, Regina - Wooow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/26/2019 9:59:00 PM
Congratulations <3
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Date: 9/26/2019 8:57:00 PM
Very Nice Regina! Congrats
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Date: 9/26/2019 7:01:00 PM
yay...back to say congratulations on your win in the contest! :) hugs
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Date: 9/26/2019 3:57:00 PM
Regina congratulations on your win in the contest with this terrific poem !
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Date: 9/26/2019 3:26:00 PM
I like what you did here, very clever and im surprised others didnt think similarly.. that is a lot of poetry in the backstreet of your mind... mine is the same... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 9/26/2019 3:20:00 PM
Congrats Regina on a top win in the contest!
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Date: 9/24/2019 12:38:00 PM
This was fantastic Regina. I think you have it all covered wonderfully. I always wondered where these poem came from. : ) Really good my friend. Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 9/24/2019 7:19:00 AM
That explains the secret behind your poetry, Regina..so much is going on in the backstreets of your mind--so well written!
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Date: 9/24/2019 12:16:00 AM
My goodness gracious ;) A gorgeous piece of writing with such an alluring and seductive twist at the end ~ Delectable!
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Date: 9/23/2019 9:04:00 PM
clever writing about how your poems are born... lovely penning my friend, good luck in the contest :) hugs
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/23/2019 9:46:00 PM
Thank you so much and many blessings to you, kind heart

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