My Wish

As members of one single clan Once we sat around a common table Partook of tasty homemade fares And laughed together over many a fable Unity then ruled like a choirmaster Symphony of tunes rang from every nook With no dissonance to mar the melody, Gaily flowed life with the music of a brook Air was filled with the fragrance of love In every need was a helping hand Contented with simple things, Men lived in amity like a single band As years slipped by in great haste The inventory of needs grew longer Cast our magnanimity asunder And bonding cords grew shorter Now we see humanity in fractions Fences, built in the name of caste and sect Violence shows its ugly head Blood is spilled and peace is lost Now is high time to retrace our steps To come back to the former blissful state When love won and brotherhood reigned Thus an earthly paradise to reinstate! (How I long my wish would come true!) June.1.2022 Placed First If Only my Wish Would Come True Sponsor- Anoucheka Gangabissoon
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Back with Congratulations on this win. A "Wonderful" write and wish. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Poet Avatar
June 24, 2022 at 4:41 AM
Back with congratulations on achieving such remarkable success, Valsa, with this superbly written piece. I concur with the message. Kindest regards
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2022 at 1:41 PM
A "Wonderful" write and wish. Man does not learn from the past. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
Baker Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 4:36 PM
I wish your wish would come true also, Valsa. To live in peace and treat others as we want to be treated. Commune in love together. A beautiful wish and good entry for the contest. Good luck! Bill
Deo Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 9:55 PM
Yes, but we are the ones who lost the ties that bind ... We must dontgevwork. God's ways are clear .... "Me of Mammon? Never both." ThanX for give Ng me zeal tompray for nations, communities, clans, dreams
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:49 PM
We need a kiss from heaven. Love the final verse! :)
Poet Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 6:50 AM
Well said, my friend. Words of wisdom to steer one's life. Valsa, the significance of the message that you convey cannot be overstated. It makes no difference to God on whether you're a road cleaning or an Emperor; in his sight, we are all the same. Best wishes in the contest.
DiMino Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Amen! Peace cannot come soon enough -- or it will be imposed on us.
Pandit Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 4:14 AM
Well said my friend. Words of wisdom. Powerful message you convey Valsa. Best to you.
Horsman Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 1:32 AM
Great work Valsa, yes as a historic, chastised when accused of not wanting to change (not true) but then change to what we are experiencing now, your poem says it all.
Cunningham Avatar
June 1, 2022 at 12:20 AM
Mankind has certainly made a mess of things, we're all human beings regardless of race, colour religion etc. Doesnt matter if you're a road sweeper or a King, in God's eyes we're all equal. Best of luck Valsa. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
May 31, 2022 at 10:00 PM
It's been war and contention since the beginning of time. Peace be with you.
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