My Wish

My wish
Is for my love
And I to be reborn
In a place where the rose’s thorn
Pricks not the heart of true lovers’ desires
But blesses us with fragrance sweet
Petals red on our bed
Granting my heart
My wish


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2018
"All Rights Reserved"

loveromanceroses are redrictameter

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Connie Marcum Wong

November 9, 2018 at 8:25 AM

I love this Carole. A special delight that touches the heart! : )

Carole Duet

November 9, 2018 at 12:44 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. What a nice comment! Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

October 18, 2018 at 1:00 PM

this is so beautiful. Is it for the wish contest. I was thinking it required three wishes. I prefer this way, one lovely wish!!

Carole Duet

October 18, 2018 at 4:02 PM

Hey Andrea! No, this is not for the "wish contest". Thanks for your lovely comment though. Carole :D

CayCay Godwin

October 18, 2018 at 11:04 AM

So sweet this is, a joy to read, Carole. I hope all is golden in your world and that you're not gone, just away. Your light is still very much turned on at Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

CayCay Godwin

October 18, 2018 at 5:35 PM

I always thought my SAME muse returned, just fully reloaded! I know yours or another yours will return, 'tis the way of the muse. Sometimes we can't keep pen and paper ready enough, other times we just stare steady. Cheering you on ...

Carole Duet

October 18, 2018 at 3:58 PM

Thank you so much, CayCay, for your comment and for the encouraging words. I am still around but I've lost my muse...hopefully will find another. Carole :D

Gary Bateman

September 23, 2018 at 4:01 PM

Hello Carole, I'm very glad I had the chance to take a read of "My Wish." This is a very marvelous and quite romantic poem. One can certainly see that it's heartfelt and captivating in the tenderness of its message. I've not done a Rictameter before. What a very interesting style. (Perhaps I'll try one of these too in the future.) Superb Work!! Best Wishes, Gary

Carole Duet

September 24, 2018 at 2:31 AM

Dear Gary...what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much. Carole :D

Paul Callus

September 21, 2018 at 4:28 PM

So lovely and romantic, Carole! Some wishes, especially those arising from the heart, do come true! Regards // paul

Carole Duet

September 22, 2018 at 11:28 PM

Thank you for your nice comment, Paul. Carole :D

Connie Marcum Wong

September 18, 2018 at 12:49 PM

A heartfelt wish Carole. I do feel it is possible. A lovely Rictameter! : )

Carole Duet

September 18, 2018 at 11:20 PM

Thank you, Connie. Carole :D

Silent One

September 18, 2018 at 5:15 AM

This is an excellent rictameter.. You said so much in a from with restrictions.. I hope your love can be reborn...

Carole Duet

September 18, 2018 at 11:19 PM

Thank you so much, ZZ.

John Gondolf

September 13, 2018 at 4:45 AM

This is really a beautiful thought, Carole, in this wonderfully written rictameter. I enjoyed it this morning. John

Carole Duet

September 13, 2018 at 3:14 PM

Thank you, John. Your comment is so encouraging. Carole

Viv Wigley

September 9, 2018 at 1:19 AM

This is lovely, Carole, says so much with so little. Viv x

Carole Duet

September 9, 2018 at 8:49 AM

Thank you, Viv. That's the beauty of poetry: you can say "so much with so little". Carole

Maria Williams

September 6, 2018 at 7:23 AM

I truly hope you have that wish granted my dear Carole. This is indeed a very beautiful poem and a fave for me....Maria hugs

Carole Duet

September 6, 2018 at 7:36 PM

Thank you, Maria. Me too... Carole :D

Charles Messina

September 5, 2018 at 12:10 PM

A wish to come true! Beautiful write, Carole. Hugs Charlie :)

Carole Duet

September 5, 2018 at 10:01 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux

September 3, 2018 at 6:05 PM

A gorgeous one!

Carole Duet

September 3, 2018 at 7:51 PM

Gee thanks, Richard. I appreciate that. Carole :D

Chris Green

September 3, 2018 at 11:36 AM

This was gorgeous Carole. I loved every line.

Carole Duet

September 3, 2018 at 12:57 PM

Thank you so much, Chris. Your opinion means a lot to me. Carole :D

Winged Warrior

September 3, 2018 at 10:13 AM

A lovely wish...may it be granted...love & wishes...^WW^

Carole Duet

September 3, 2018 at 12:58 PM

Thank you, ^WW^. Backacha! Carole :D

Arturo Michael

September 2, 2018 at 7:22 PM

I wish you'd have your wish...such a lovely one...All the Carole

Carole Duet

September 2, 2018 at 7:37 PM

Thank you, Arturo. That's very sweet of you. Carole

Darlene De Beaulieu

September 2, 2018 at 6:28 PM

Hello Carol, roses are my favourite flowers. They are beautiful. I like your poem. I am healing from surgery on my toe. Have a nice evening my friend.

Carole Duet

September 2, 2018 at 7:39 PM

Hi Darlene! I hope your toe heals quickly and that you will be feeling well soon. And, thank you so much for reading and commenting on "My Wish". Carole :D