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My Wish

My wish
Is for my love
And I to be reborn
In a place where the rose’s thorn
Pricks not the heart of true lovers’ desires
But blesses us with fragrance sweet
Petals red on our bed
Granting my heart
My wish


By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
Copyright:  2018
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Connie Marcum Wong Date: 11/9/2018 8:25:00 AM I love this Carole. A special delight that touches the heart! : ) Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 11/9/2018 12:44:00 PM Thank you so much, Connie. What a nice comment! Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/18/2018 1:00:00 PM this is so beautiful. Is it for the wish contest. I was thinking it required three wishes. I prefer this way, one lovely wish!! Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 10/18/2018 4:02:00 PM Hey Andrea! No, this is not for the "wish contest". Thanks for your lovely comment though. Carole :D

CayCay Jennings Date: 10/18/2018 11:04:00 AM So sweet this is, a joy to read, Carole. I hope all is golden in your world and that you're not gone, just away. Your light is still very much turned on at Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 10/18/2018 5:35:00 PM I always thought my SAME muse returned, just fully reloaded! I know yours or another yours will return, 'tis the way of the muse. Sometimes we can't keep pen and paper ready enough, other times we just stare steady. Cheering you on ... Carole Duet Date: 10/18/2018 3:58:00 PM Thank you so much, CayCay, for your comment and for the encouraging words. I am still around but I've lost my muse...hopefully will find another. Carole :D

Gary Bateman Date: 9/23/2018 4:01:00 PM Hello Carole, I'm very glad I had the chance to take a read of "My Wish." This is a very marvelous and quite romantic poem. One can certainly see that it's heartfelt and captivating in the tenderness of its message. I've not done a Rictameter before. What a very interesting style. (Perhaps I'll try one of these too in the future.) Superb Work!! Best Wishes, Gary Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/24/2018 2:31:00 AM Dear Gary...what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much. Carole :D

Paul Callus Date: 9/21/2018 4:28:00 PM So lovely and romantic, Carole! Some wishes, especially those arising from the heart, do come true! Regards // paul Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/22/2018 11:28:00 PM Thank you for your nice comment, Paul. Carole :D

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 9/18/2018 12:49:00 PM A heartfelt wish Carole. I do feel it is possible. A lovely Rictameter! : ) Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/18/2018 11:20:00 PM Thank you, Connie. Carole :D

Silent One Date: 9/18/2018 5:15:00 AM This is an excellent rictameter.. You said so much in a from with restrictions.. I hope your love can be reborn... Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/18/2018 11:19:00 PM Thank you so much, ZZ.

John Gondolf Date: 9/13/2018 4:45:00 AM This is really a beautiful thought, Carole, in this wonderfully written rictameter. I enjoyed it this morning. John Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/13/2018 3:14:00 PM Thank you, John. Your comment is so encouraging. Carole

Viv Wigley Date: 9/9/2018 1:19:00 AM This is lovely, Carole, says so much with so little. Viv x Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/9/2018 8:49:00 AM Thank you, Viv. That's the beauty of poetry: you can say "so much with so little". Carole

Maria Williams Date: 9/6/2018 7:23:00 AM I truly hope you have that wish granted my dear Carole. This is indeed a very beautiful poem and a fave for me....Maria hugs Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/6/2018 7:36:00 PM Thank you, Maria. Me too... Carole :D

Charles Messina Date: 9/5/2018 12:10:00 PM A wish to come true! Beautiful write, Carole. Hugs Charlie :) Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/5/2018 10:01:00 PM Thank you so much, Charlie. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/3/2018 6:05:00 PM A gorgeous one! Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/3/2018 7:51:00 PM Gee thanks, Richard. I appreciate that. Carole :D

Chris Green Date: 9/3/2018 11:36:00 AM This was gorgeous Carole. I loved every line. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/3/2018 12:57:00 PM Thank you so much, Chris. Your opinion means a lot to me. Carole :D

Winged Warrior Date: 9/3/2018 10:13:00 AM A lovely wish...may it be granted...love & wishes...^WW^ Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/3/2018 12:58:00 PM Thank you, ^WW^. Backacha! Carole :D

Arturo Michael Date: 9/2/2018 7:22:00 PM I wish you'd have your wish...such a lovely one...All the Carole Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/2/2018 7:37:00 PM Thank you, Arturo. That's very sweet of you. Carole

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 9/2/2018 6:28:00 PM Hello Carol, roses are my favourite flowers. They are beautiful. I like your poem. I am healing from surgery on my toe. Have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/2/2018 7:39:00 PM Hi Darlene! I hope your toe heals quickly and that you will be feeling well soon. And, thank you so much for reading and commenting on "My Wish". Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/2/2018 6:06:00 PM Oh my, I love this one . I love a good romantic poem and I love what you portrayed about soul mate love through this form. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/2/2018 7:40:00 PM Thanks, Andrea. You are very kind. Carole :D

Line Gauthier Date: 9/2/2018 4:14:00 PM Sweet, Carole. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/2/2018 7:41:00 PM Hello, Line. I'm so glad you think this one is "sweet"....like me! lol Carole :D

Kim Rodrigues Date: 9/2/2018 3:44:00 PM Very romantic! Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/2/2018 7:47:00 PM Thanks, Kim. I love to write romantic poems and it's so nice that you found it "romantic" too. Carole :D

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2018 3:18:00 PM How charming is this poem! May the red petals grant the wish!! Well done, Carole. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 9/2/2018 7:48:00 PM Thank you, Vijay. "If wishes were horses...." Carole :D