My Wish

My wish Is for my love And I to be reborn In a place where the rose’s thorn Pricks not the heart of true lovers’ desires But blesses us with fragrance sweet Petals red on our bed Granting my heart My wish By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: 2018 "All Rights Reserved"

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/9/2018 8:25:00 AM

I love this Carole. A special delight that touches the heart! : )

Carole Duet
Date: 11/9/2018 12:44:00 PM

Thank you so much, Connie. What a nice comment! Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/18/2018 1:00:00 PM

this is so beautiful. Is it for the wish contest. I was thinking it required three wishes. I prefer this way, one lovely wish!!

Carole Duet
Date: 10/18/2018 4:02:00 PM

Hey Andrea! No, this is not for the "wish contest". Thanks for your lovely comment though. Carole :D

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/18/2018 11:04:00 AM

So sweet this is, a joy to read, Carole. I hope all is golden in your world and that you're not gone, just away. Your light is still very much turned on at Soup. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Caycay Jennings
Date: 10/18/2018 5:35:00 PM

I always thought my SAME muse returned, just fully reloaded! I know yours or another yours will return, 'tis the way of the muse. Sometimes we can't keep pen and paper ready enough, other times we just stare steady. Cheering you on ...

Carole Duet
Date: 10/18/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thank you so much, CayCay, for your comment and for the encouraging words. I am still around but I've lost my muse...hopefully will find another. Carole :D

Gary Bateman

Date: 9/23/2018 4:01:00 PM

Hello Carole, I'm very glad I had the chance to take a read of "My Wish." This is a very marvelous and quite romantic poem. One can certainly see that it's heartfelt and captivating in the tenderness of its message. I've not done a Rictameter before. What a very interesting style. (Perhaps I'll try one of these too in the future.) Superb Work!! Best Wishes, Gary

Carole Duet
Date: 9/24/2018 2:31:00 AM

Dear Gary...what a lovely compliment! Thank you so much. Carole :D

Paul Callus

Date: 9/21/2018 4:28:00 PM

So lovely and romantic, Carole! Some wishes, especially those arising from the heart, do come true! Regards // paul

Carole Duet
Date: 9/22/2018 11:28:00 PM

Thank you for your nice comment, Paul. Carole :D

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/18/2018 12:49:00 PM

A heartfelt wish Carole. I do feel it is possible. A lovely Rictameter! : )

Carole Duet
Date: 9/18/2018 11:20:00 PM

Thank you, Connie. Carole :D

Silent One

Date: 9/18/2018 5:15:00 AM

This is an excellent rictameter.. You said so much in a from with restrictions.. I hope your love can be reborn...

Carole Duet
Date: 9/18/2018 11:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, ZZ.

John Gondolf

Date: 9/13/2018 4:45:00 AM

This is really a beautiful thought, Carole, in this wonderfully written rictameter. I enjoyed it this morning. John

Carole Duet
Date: 9/13/2018 3:14:00 PM

Thank you, John. Your comment is so encouraging. Carole

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/9/2018 1:19:00 AM

This is lovely, Carole, says so much with so little. Viv x

Carole Duet
Date: 9/9/2018 8:49:00 AM

Thank you, Viv. That's the beauty of poetry: you can say "so much with so little". Carole

Maria Williams

Date: 9/6/2018 7:23:00 AM

I truly hope you have that wish granted my dear Carole. This is indeed a very beautiful poem and a fave for me....Maria hugs

Carole Duet
Date: 9/6/2018 7:36:00 PM

Thank you, Maria. Me too... Carole :D

Charles Messina

Date: 9/5/2018 12:10:00 PM

A wish to come true! Beautiful write, Carole. Hugs Charlie :)

Carole Duet
Date: 9/5/2018 10:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charlie. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/3/2018 6:05:00 PM

A gorgeous one!

Carole Duet
Date: 9/3/2018 7:51:00 PM

Gee thanks, Richard. I appreciate that. Carole :D

Chris Green

Date: 9/3/2018 11:36:00 AM

This was gorgeous Carole. I loved every line.

Carole Duet
Date: 9/3/2018 12:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris. Your opinion means a lot to me. Carole :D

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/3/2018 10:13:00 AM

A lovely wish...may it be granted...love & wishes...^WW^

Carole Duet
Date: 9/3/2018 12:58:00 PM

Thank you, ^WW^. Backacha! Carole :D

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/2/2018 7:22:00 PM

I wish you'd have your wish...such a lovely one...All the Carole

Carole Duet
Date: 9/2/2018 7:37:00 PM

Thank you, Arturo. That's very sweet of you. Carole

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/2/2018 6:28:00 PM

Hello Carol, roses are my favourite flowers. They are beautiful. I like your poem. I am healing from surgery on my toe. Have a nice evening my friend.

Carole Duet
Date: 9/2/2018 7:39:00 PM

Hi Darlene! I hope your toe heals quickly and that you will be feeling well soon. And, thank you so much for reading and commenting on "My Wish". Carole :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/2/2018 6:06:00 PM

Oh my, I love this one . I love a good romantic poem and I love what you portrayed about soul mate love through this form.

Carole Duet
Date: 9/2/2018 7:40:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. You are very kind. Carole :D