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My Winter

There is no greater perfection than being young in Winter to watch the snow quietly fall, to build upon itself Like the days when I was young and Winter came From the dark gray clouds, white flat ornaments fell We would recklessly run trying to catch them on our warm tongues, stumbling falling in slow motion into the snow, laughing doing what boys do Our truest joy was riding sleds There was a hill with a winding path, from top to bottom After Christmas, every boy would drag their family's tree to the hilltop and toss it onto a bonfire that sometimes got out of control doing what boys do, laughing We would race our sleds, some old, some new and would try to stay on the narrow path winding down the hill, between tall naked trees doing what boys do It would hurt if you hit one and if new you didn't want to drag it home...to dad At the bottom, the path forked the path to the left would dip and rise lifting you on to a frozen road where you sled would glide for hundreds of yards If you were brave you would take the fork to the right where you had a steep drop that increased your speed taking you to a ledge eight feet above a creek Sometimes it was frozen, sometimes not and if you couldn't stop your sled you would fly over into the creek if that happened all the boys would rush down peer over the cliff and if we saw signs of life we would laugh doing what boys do When Winter came and the snow fell When we were young and wanted to laugh doing what boys do...playing 11/17/17 contest My Winter

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Date: 12/15/2017 9:23:00 PM
A sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Frederic - blessings to you ... this is superb, Brother, and takes me back! :-)
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Date: 12/1/2017 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Frederic, great poem brought back memories of my childhood. :))
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Date: 11/29/2017 10:38:00 AM
You really let the words flow to recreate a meaningful memory. Boys do live dangerously. Glad I had girls. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/29/2017 2:15:00 AM
I superb recollection for us lads, Frederic, and that first line is an absolute belter. Congrats on your placement in my contest. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:22:00 PM
You took me back Federic to my Flexible Flier---it was my ship on the snow--great memories shared here
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Date: 11/17/2017 6:33:00 PM
What fun to read your poem taking us through these precious memories Frederic. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest :)
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