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Throughout my life, I've visited family members and friends in nursing homes and

assisted living facilities. I've observed that the majority of patients/residents seem at

peace. They smile and speak to everyone. When my sunset time nears, I hope to feel

peaceful and satisfied, regardless of where I am.

I view this hazy sunset God has made and ponder what it means to me today. One's memories of early life will fade when energy of youth has ebbed away. I lie beside my window every night inside this home of many who, like me, now face sunset and evening's waning light. I know that soon my spirit will be free. The younger folks who pity me don't know the peace I feel. I seek the Father's face each evening when the sun is sinking low. He gives me strength through His unending grace. The setting of my sun will be sublime, for in the Father's bosom I will rest. He's let me see the sunset one more time. I close my eyes and know I have been blessed. entered in Silent One's Sunrise and Sunset Contest on February 16, 2018

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/9/2018 3:06:00 PM

A FAVE ! Lovely, congrats on your most deserved win, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/9/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line! Janice

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/19/2018 3:41:00 PM

Oh how absolutely beautiful and peaceful your poem is, Janice. I love your take on the contest theme and the spirituality of your blissful write. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this inspiring poem. ~Susan

Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/19/2018 4:04:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan! Janice

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 2/19/2018 8:18:00 AM

You relate well the story of many altho not your own, tying it in to the sunset. Many who stare out the windows of their confinement wishing for better health and happiness. God has a plan for all of us. Congrats on your spiritual piece and its placement, Janice.

Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/19/2018 11:12:00 AM

Reason, thank you so much. Janice