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My Wedding Ring - Part 2

So my super decided
He’d break down the wall.
He’d recover my ring
With no problem at all.

First he smashed down the back
Of the closet behind
Where the bathtub resides 
(And the ring was confined).

But he couldn’t quite reach
So the hole kept on growing.
I wasn’t relaxed 
With the way things were going.

I tried to say, “Stop!”
But more workers arrived,
All convinced that my wedding ring
Surely survived.

As I paced and regretted
Allowing this folly,
The super extracted my ring – 
Oh, my golly!

I burst into tears
Not believing my luck,
Amazed that my ring
Wasn’t vanished or stuck.

I looked up a jeweler
Who shined it to gleaming
And almost believed
All this time I’d been dreaming.

The ending is happy
So I’m not complaining
But this is one day
That was totally draining.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/28/2015 1:34:00 PM
So glad you got it back, Ilene. What a nice Super!
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:40:00 PM
After all the years that you had it. THAT'S AWESOME! Give that man a beer. :) And as for this 8 stanza write. WOW! And as usual, or rather beyond usual, your ending was amazing. Did I go on too much. Well, I meant to. Love good news. :) Peace. :)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/20/2015 7:09:00 PM
hey robert! it's always such a treat to get a comment from you. you sure know how to lift my spirits! thank you so much...
Date: 2/19/2015 7:49:00 PM
I enjoyed the flow and the happy ending, can feel the over all stress turn to alleviation. Nicely done.
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/20/2015 7:06:00 PM
thank you for reading and commenting. i was pretty stressed-out and i guess it really came through in the poem.
Date: 2/19/2015 7:04:00 PM
Oh Ilene what a wonderful ending to this saga - with the repair bill for the damage it will be one heck of an expensive ring in even more ways than one:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/20/2015 7:05:00 PM
you're right, jan! with all the money we paid out, i could have had a nice new ring but there's sentimental value to this one that made it worth all the aggravation.
Date: 2/19/2015 7:02:00 PM
Hooray !!!!
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/20/2015 7:04:00 PM
thanks, tim! i'm sorry you didn't have the same happy ending with your ring, though...
Date: 2/19/2015 6:28:00 PM
Oh Dear!!! I'm so so glad you got it back dear!!! What a treasure! Hugs Loved the play on DRAINING! ;)
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 2/20/2015 7:03:00 PM
thanks, eileen! i'm so glad you picked up the draining line - that makes me happy...

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