Barbara Gorelick Poet Limerick

My Very Own Tree Stump

He really was as dumb as a tree stump
Carried all his weight in his big old rump
But I fell for his line
And made him all mine
'Cause he was as sweet as dear Forest Gump

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Joe Maverick October 18, 2010 at 9:48 AM good and cheerfull write, and his sweetness redeems any other failings.well penned barbra.

Harry Horsman October 18, 2010 at 12:58 AM Gee he's a lucky old stump, Barbara. love this excellent Limerick. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 17, 2010 at 8:53 PM Very cute and creative Barb.. good luck in the contest by Matt... a cool write luv..

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2010 at 8:17 PM Hey, did you write about hubbie too, like I did? hahaha. This is very cute. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta October 17, 2010 at 3:48 PM very nice write with personification with humor and wit, Barbara

James Fraser October 17, 2010 at 9:58 AM This is so cute Barbara, it made me chuckle. Forest Gump was an endearing film. Good luck in the contest girl >> James :)x

Carolyn Devonshire October 17, 2010 at 7:03 AM Hmmm, I'm wondering who inspired this poem, dear LNC. Anyone I know? It's really very clever and should do well in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Kim Hilliker October 16, 2010 at 11:33 PM lol. lol. lol. :-) Awesome!

Poet Destroyer A October 16, 2010 at 9:26 PM such a sweet and cute write, enjoyed this one Barbara,..p.d.

Wayne Sapp October 16, 2010 at 8:57 PM Well done Barbara! I would never have believed there were more than two rhyming words ending in ump! Fun Poem!

Francine Roberts October 16, 2010 at 8:52 PM too cute, love your limerick