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Nursery Rhymes 7 Poetry Contest

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Mamma, please give me a fairy. I want someone nice to play with. Please, mamma, just a tiny one. Preferably with lots of wit. Come on, mamma, it can't cost much We'll play on the porch, she and I, Quickly, I'll teach her to catch ball And she’ll teach me how to fly high. Mamma, so easy to find one, Maybe under a flower pot. And if, at night, she feels so cold, I'll share with her my cosy cot. Placed 1

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Date: 9/30/2024 2:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Nursery Rhyme write. Have a great day with your win..................
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Date: 9/28/2024 12:48:00 PM
Victor what a terrific nursery rhyme - I loved it and oh soooooooooooo cute. I Have just missed Eve Ropers contest and am sad about it, but glad I wrote my nursery rhyme anyway anyway. I hope you are keeping well. Blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 9/22/2024 1:27:00 PM
Very sweet nursery rhyme Victor! I enjoyed it. :)
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Date: 9/20/2024 9:23:00 PM
I like this childhood tale. Good luck with the contest. This may be a winner.
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Date: 9/19/2024 11:17:00 AM
This is so beautiful dear victor, let me try to comment again, and youv written one that is so catchy and so sweet! And its really fitting for the picture prompt! I especially love the ending and how descriptive it is as well as your melodious rhymes! Profound! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always
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Date: 9/19/2024 7:54:00 AM
A lovely write Victor, best wishes
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Date: 9/19/2024 7:20:00 AM
Dear Victor, what a sweet childhood poem and I will share it with my grandchildren. I loved the rhymes and the story told. Have a great day my friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/19/2024 12:31:00 AM
Well rhymed and a sweet story. Best wishes, Pangie
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Date: 9/18/2024 10:49:00 PM
so lovely poetry, enjoyed dear poet yann
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Date: 9/18/2024 9:42:00 PM
A child's belief in magic is so heartwarming. What a charming nursery rhyme! Best of wishes for the contest. :)
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Date: 9/18/2024 9:12:00 PM
Children fancy playing with fairies and angels, may the through ideas got by listening to stories. A lovely nursery rhyme, quite suiting to the image. A beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best dear Victor.
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Date: 9/18/2024 6:37:00 PM
Darling, precious poem, Victor. Well done!
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Date: 9/18/2024 1:22:00 PM
That’s so lovely Victor, a delightful nursery rhyme that children are bound to love… Beryl
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Date: 9/18/2024 9:51:00 AM
Fun write! Love your use of imagination!
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Date: 9/18/2024 6:34:00 AM
what a charming rhyme Victor - we have fairies on the Isle of Man - they live under fairy bridge! hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2024 6:33:00 AM
what a charming rhyme Victor - we have fairies on the Isle of Man - they live under fairy bridge! hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2024 5:32:00 AM
Let's hope he doesn't squish her when she gets into a snit. Nice entry Vic
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Date: 9/18/2024 5:02:00 AM
Lovely nursery rhyme Victor, many kids have imaginary friends it makes you wonder. Greetings from Spain. Tom
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