Victor Buhagiar Poet Rhyme

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Nursery Rhymes 7 Poetry Contest

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My very own Fairy

Mamma, please give me a fairy.
I want someone nice to play with.
Please, mamma, just a tiny one.
Preferably with lots of wit.

Come on, mamma, it can't cost much
We'll play on the porch, she and I,
Quickly, I'll teach her to catch ball
And she’ll teach me how to fly high.

Mamma, so easy to find one,
Maybe under a flower pot.
And if, at night, she feels so cold,
I'll share with her my cosy cot.


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Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2024 at 2:14 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Nursery Rhyme write. Have a great day with your win..................

Jennifer Proxenos September 28, 2024 at 12:48 PM Victor what a terrific nursery rhyme - I loved it and oh soooooooooooo cute. I Have just missed Eve Ropers contest and am sad about it, but glad I wrote my nursery rhyme anyway anyway. I hope you are keeping well. Blessings Jennifer.

Linda Alice Fowler September 22, 2024 at 1:27 PM Very sweet nursery rhyme Victor! I enjoyed it. :)

Hilda Greenhough September 20, 2024 at 9:23 PM I like this childhood tale. Good luck with the contest. This may be a winner.

Ink Empress September 19, 2024 at 11:17 AM This is so beautiful dear victor, let me try to comment again, and youv written one that is so catchy and so sweet! And its really fitting for the picture prompt! I especially love the ending and how descriptive it is as well as your melodious rhymes! Profound! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always

Joseph May September 19, 2024 at 7:54 AM A lovely write Victor, best wishes

Daniel Henry Rodgers September 19, 2024 at 7:20 AM Dear Victor, what a sweet childhood poem and I will share it with my grandchildren. I loved the rhymes and the story told. Have a great day my friend, Daniel

Panagiota Romios September 19, 2024 at 12:31 AM Well rhymed and a sweet story. Best wishes, Pangie

Yann Rolland September 18, 2024 at 10:49 PM so lovely poetry, enjoyed dear poet yann

Evelyn Judy Buehler September 18, 2024 at 9:42 PM A child's belief in magic is so heartwarming. What a charming nursery rhyme! Best of wishes for the contest. :)

Valsa George September 18, 2024 at 9:12 PM Children fancy playing with fairies and angels, may the through ideas got by listening to stories. A lovely nursery rhyme, quite suiting to the image. A beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best dear Victor.

Joseph P. DiMino September 18, 2024 at 6:37 PM Darling, precious poem, Victor. Well done!

Beryl Edmonds September 18, 2024 at 1:22 PM That’s so lovely Victor, a delightful nursery rhyme that children are bound to love… Beryl

Karen Jones September 18, 2024 at 9:51 AM Fun write! Love your use of imagination!

Jan Allison September 18, 2024 at 6:34 AM what a charming rhyme Victor - we have fairies on the Isle of Man - they live under fairy bridge! hugs jan xx

Jan Allison September 18, 2024 at 6:33 AM what a charming rhyme Victor - we have fairies on the Isle of Man - they live under fairy bridge! hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham September 18, 2024 at 5:02 AM Lovely nursery rhyme Victor, many kids have imaginary friends it makes you wonder. Greetings from Spain. Tom