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My very own Fairy

Mamma, please give me a fairy.
I want someone nice to play with.
Please, mamma, just a tiny one.
Preferably with lots of wit.

Come on, mamma, it can't cost much
We'll play on the porch, she and I,
Quickly, I'll teach her to catch ball
And she’ll teach me how to fly high.

Mamma, so easy to find one,
Maybe under a flower pot.
And if, at night, she feels so cold,
I'll share with her my cosy cot.


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Paula Goldsmith Date: 9/30/2024 2:14:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Nursery Rhyme write. Have a great day with your win.................. Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/28/2024 12:48:00 PM Victor what a terrific nursery rhyme - I loved it and oh soooooooooooo cute. I Have just missed Eve Ropers contest and am sad about it, but glad I wrote my nursery rhyme anyway anyway. I hope you are keeping well. Blessings Jennifer. Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/22/2024 1:27:00 PM Very sweet nursery rhyme Victor! I enjoyed it. :) Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 9/20/2024 9:23:00 PM I like this childhood tale. Good luck with the contest. This may be a winner. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 9/19/2024 11:17:00 AM This is so beautiful dear victor, let me try to comment again, and youv written one that is so catchy and so sweet! And its really fitting for the picture prompt! I especially love the ending and how descriptive it is as well as your melodious rhymes! Profound! Best wishes for the contest! Sending you light always Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 9/19/2024 7:54:00 AM A lovely write Victor, best wishes Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 9/19/2024 7:20:00 AM Dear Victor, what a sweet childhood poem and I will share it with my grandchildren. I loved the rhymes and the story told. Have a great day my friend, Daniel Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 9/19/2024 12:31:00 AM Well rhymed and a sweet story. Best wishes, Pangie Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 9/18/2024 10:49:00 PM so lovely poetry, enjoyed dear poet yann Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 9/18/2024 9:42:00 PM A child's belief in magic is so heartwarming. What a charming nursery rhyme! Best of wishes for the contest. :) Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 9/18/2024 9:12:00 PM Children fancy playing with fairies and angels, may the through ideas got by listening to stories. A lovely nursery rhyme, quite suiting to the image. A beautiful entry for the contest. All the Best dear Victor. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 9/18/2024 6:37:00 PM Darling, precious poem, Victor. Well done! Login to Reply

Beryl Edmonds Date: 9/18/2024 1:22:00 PM That’s so lovely Victor, a delightful nursery rhyme that children are bound to love… Beryl Login to Reply

Karen Jones Date: 9/18/2024 9:51:00 AM Fun write! Love your use of imagination! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2024 6:34:00 AM what a charming rhyme Victor - we have fairies on the Isle of Man - they live under fairy bridge! hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/18/2024 6:33:00 AM what a charming rhyme Victor - we have fairies on the Isle of Man - they live under fairy bridge! hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Tom Woody Date: 9/18/2024 5:32:00 AM Let's hope he doesn't squish her when she gets into a snit. Nice entry Vic Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 9/18/2024 5:02:00 AM Lovely nursery rhyme Victor, many kids have imaginary friends it makes you wonder. Greetings from Spain. Tom Login to Reply