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My Valentine, How You Shine - Part - 3 - Valoentine's Collection - 2020

9. Together, we find paradise. we now stand under summer skies, mighty Arrach, before our eyes. We now stand upon love’s own shore, you are the one I do adore, our bright temple’s entwined some more. Your beauty brings us into light, it is a beacon, shining bright, your awesome beauty is a sight. In your beauty, we come to fly, together, under this bright sky, by Arrach’s mountain stream, we lie. My Valentine, my paradise, under beautiful, azure skies. 10. Under beautiful, azure skies, you are ever my paradise, under azure skies, our heart lies. We lie within a world of gold, it is your heart that I do hold, a heart that shall sing love so bold. Sing love’s song, our heart is alight, I take your hand, under Sol’s light, in eternal grace, you shine bright. Our song alive, as love, does burn, your song shall make our love to turn, divinely, our love shall now burn. Not one single beat, our love miss, love leads us to peaceful bliss. 11. Love leads us to peaceful bliss, the heart sings with every kiss, love sings when we both sing like this. When with you, I feel such delight, within this dream, there is no night, for our love does shine golden bright. Your beauty sings within your song, within Heaven, you do belong, love, we stay away from the throng. Beloved, with love you do shine, two jewels in a face divine, I drown within love’s precious wine. Not one thing more shall I now miss when I do feel your precious kiss. 12. When I do feel your precious kiss, lost in your love, I find my bliss, Yours is the kiss I always miss. Such joy divine my heart does feel, my love I can never conceal, under Sol’s light, our love is real. Such peace shall come to us within, we share our love, it is no sin, our heart shines when love does begin. Your eyes forever shine with love, they shine as bright as stars above, they shine with love, my precious dove. Each night with you, I do feel bliss, Your love I would so sadly miss. 13. Your love I would so sadly miss, and gone would be Heavenly bliss, my heart would die without your kiss. Open your heart and let me in, we know joy when love does begin, in dream, we join, within our sin. Ever, your love I come to seek, in love’s caress your heart I keep, into love’s domain, we do leap. Love forever blooms in our soul, you are love’s ultimate goal, for your love, I pay any toll. Tears of joy, they do ever shine, you are ever my Valentine.

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Date: 7/27/2020 7:26:00 AM
You amaze me how you are able to write such long pieces and do it so exceptionally well. Off to part four.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/27/2020 10:09:00 AM
Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. It can be really hard trying to write these crowns of Sonnets, just trying to keep a flow from the first to the last. Have a wonderful Monday. Blessings....Mike.
Date: 7/25/2020 10:12:00 AM
Your lovely poem sings with love Mike. A valentine to keep close to the heart forever. Blessings xxoo
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/25/2020 12:29:00 PM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I do enjoy writing these crowns of sonnetts. This is a complete crown. Have a wonderful Evening. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 7/25/2020 8:09:00 AM
What an endearing thing to say "You are ever my Valentine" who could resist a poem with such beautiful sentiments. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/25/2020 10:03:00 AM
Hi Jennifer, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. This lady shall ever be my Valentine, the light of my heart. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 7/25/2020 7:29:00 AM
I would like to thank all those who have taken the time to view this piece. You help a would-be poet to go on. Have a wonderful day....Mike.
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Date: 7/25/2020 7:05:00 AM
Beautiful, loving poem. Nice one to read today :)
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 7/25/2020 9:52:00 AM
Hi Heidi, sorry I have not visited in so long. I have been on another hiatus from the soup. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX

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