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My Valentine Gift - 1st One

She blushes in awe
Desiring nothing more than
To accept my gift
That of which I humbly give
My heart, of love, beating true

Russell Sivey

Original thought for an entry into Andrea Dietrich's contest. Made another poem to enter into contest! This ones good, just wanted a better one for contest!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/5/2012 2:12:00 PM
this is such a sweet tanka, nothing more romantic than to give your heart...
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:03:00 PM
Yes, I think this is very good, Russell - I look forward to reading the second one that you preferred
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:02:00 AM
a most intangible gift, russell... a poetic delight that will climb up the charts..:) hugggs!
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:39:00 AM
and just like thee good ole' Faithful Clock works,,,so is the promptitude of yir New Poem-age! Feliz de Valentine amigo!~
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Date: 2/4/2012 10:05:00 PM
love it mate ...just first rate ... as good as or better more... good poetry 4 sure!
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