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My Unique Line Cb

A speck...upon this earth am I This is a unique line as I can face this fact. This is who I am. For P.D's Contest 6th Place

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/24/2014 2:44:00 AM

Carol, Great one-liner for those who realize. Mohan

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/7/2011 1:07:00 PM

Thank you to all who have written upon my page. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/5/2011 10:32:00 PM

HI CAROL AGAIN ;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 11/7/2011 1:08:00 PM

Thank you P.D. I am happy you liked it. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2011 9:01:00 PM

way to go, Carol. congrats in the one line contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/5/2011 6:02:00 PM

Congrats Carol on a big win for this unique line my friend... always poignant ...

Don Johnson

Date: 11/1/2011 10:19:00 PM

unique 2.....well done baby blue...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/1/2011 9:00:00 PM

most excellent expression of our true selves Carol.. a loving and lovely thought..good luck in PD's contest my friend..luv..

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 11/1/2011 5:04:00 PM

* “Well, If Your Lovely Beauty Is But A Speck Then * I Am Not Even A Particle of Dust * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Carol * Yesss, I Most Surely Do * My Luv, Always * Sarah.” *

James Fraser

Date: 11/1/2011 2:46:00 PM

We sure are Carol. Good luck in pd's contest :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2011 12:54:00 PM

Dear Carol, I was just writing a comment to Jimbo Goff about feeling like a "speck" in the universe. No one can argue with the truth of our monoku. Wishing you succcess in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/1/2011 6:48:00 AM

I like to remeber how big the universe is and I am so small compared to that.

Dalila Agtani

Date: 10/31/2011 11:52:00 PM

Enigmatic monoku Carol. It is such a simple line but it made me think. A speck? a small particle? Nice monoku. I want to thank you for your kind words on my works. Dalila

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2011 11:43:00 PM

YEs, I think it says in the Bible less than a grain of sand. And yet we are still very unique!!

Judy Ball

Date: 10/31/2011 1:24:00 PM

Really deep thinking here. Too bad more of us don't look at ourselves as we really are and stop thinking we are so all important that nothing else in creation matters. Reminds me of an old saying. "I'M NOT IMPORTANT BECAUSE OF WHAT I OWN BUT BECAUSE OF WHO OWNS ME." God Bless, JB

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/31/2011 1:08:00 PM

Love his Carol, you say so much with this line.. Hope the week ahead will be a great one.. Love Wilma

Gwendolen Song

Date: 10/31/2011 12:41:00 PM

Ain't this the truth,...yet,...I am a miracle knitted together in my mother's womb.... Gwendolen

Jack Horne

Date: 10/31/2011 9:49:00 AM

Indeed, Carol - it puts things into perspective when we think of ourselves like that, doesn't it? Many congrats on your wins too : )

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/31/2011 9:05:00 AM

Yeahs we are all just a speck on this Earth...Little moving specks of dust-like pieces scattered across the land! Great write Carol!!

John Smith

Date: 10/31/2011 9:04:00 AM

What the heck! I expect this speck to collect lots more respect.

Dean Wood

Date: 10/31/2011 6:38:00 AM

or on earth i am a speck? x deano x