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My Umbrella It was the reason for everything, needed, that had any value. It started with rain, on a Sunday morning. It moved to the car, that would not start. Then there was a man, a stranger, an unexpected hero. He stopped when no one would. He waded through the unyielding, onslaught of heavy laden, ice drops. Drenched. My tire, it was flat. Kissed the pavement as if it would never let go. He was not happy, but perserverant. I tried to pay him. He would not take a dime. I waved good-bye, as his big truck rolled away. Then I noticed, my dry umbrella. It was on the floor by the door. I bowed my head. I prayed, Lord, keep that hero dry, and safe, this day, this night, this storm, the next… forever! Amen.

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Date: 11/23/2019 7:24:00 AM
So many earth angels appear when we are least expecting them. This is one.
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Date: 11/23/2019 11:16:00 AM
Funny, I have been 100 miles from no where, with my kids, stuck ... and a mile back a man and his wife helped us that were camping. They only came one weekend a year... the weekend I needed them??? If that is not a first class miracle... then... :)
Date: 11/21/2019 3:01:00 PM
enjoyed reading.. good Samaritans are the Lord's guardian angels.
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Date: 11/23/2019 11:15:00 AM
so true friend... they come from out of no where...and do great things, as if they are simple tasks, then disappear... Oh yes... Angel description in my book. Hugs. Ann
Date: 11/20/2019 8:36:00 PM
OMG - wonderful story and wonderful wrap-up, Ann. You redeemed yourself in the end with your blessing... poor guy!
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Ann Foster
Date: 11/23/2019 11:11:00 AM
God take care of those that step away from their own path, to vary into ours... at their expense. Hugs. Have a super day. Ann

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