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My True Hero

I had a quarrel with my own life I didn’t want to divulge it to anyone I knew It was then I met the one who in many eyes, Had sparked feelings of sympathy or contempt Confined to a wheel chair in a hospital room Amid the smell of death and disease, He looked so resigned to his fate With a rare gleam sparkling his eyes Convalescing after his sixth surgery, Still having bouts of excruciating pain What made me drawn to him, I cannot tell Later I met him at his home several times, Still on wheelchair, crooked and disfigured, But with what stoic nonchalance, He accepted his condition- Cerebral palsy, a disease affecting all his limbs He said it was after years of questioning That he had learnt to take on his disability It broadened his understanding of suffering Giving him deltas of new insight... He knows now, the stars would be brighter Only with the light completely blown out! Even when the ground falls beneath his feet He finds a way to rise up from the ground With every step he takes, he feels it better than yesterday And waits for tomorrow in anticipation Because he has made it today! Sure he reigns as a true hero, stirring a spark In the ash covered cinders of my heart July. 28.2022 ~Placed First~ To Honour my Hero Poetry Contest Sponsored by Anoucheka Gangabisoon

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Date: 8/18/2022 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Many times we do not know what others are going though. Have a great/blessed day.........................
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Valsa George
Date: 8/18/2022 7:16:00 PM
Yes, dear Paula. We hardly know,through what all sufferings, others pass. We magnify our own little setbacks and crying over them make our life miserable. Thanks sweet friend for your hearty congratulations
Date: 8/18/2022 10:19:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win as you lift up this life of true courage and hope. What an amazing example to all of us. And, you express it in your signature of creative unique and fresh images - "a quarrel with myself," "ash covered cinders of my heart," "deltas of new insight." Always amazing my friend. Blessings.
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Date: 8/18/2022 7:12:00 PM
How deeply you have made a perusal of my poem. You have picked up all the striking images, over which I too felt some satisfaction. Your poems and your comments are equally adorable. Thanks a lot Sam for your lovely words
Date: 8/18/2022 9:24:00 AM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your win with this outstanding poem. Your story truly brought tears to my eyes - how incomparably strong and inspiring your hero is after someone underwent terrible sufferings! This is a fave for me. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 8/18/2022 7:08:00 PM
Mala, he still undergoes a lot of suffering. Yet he is seen always cheerful and never complains. His example is worthy of emulation. Thanks a lot dear sweet friend....
Date: 7/28/2022 10:06:00 PM
Your hero is surely taking gigantic, bold steps toward Heaven!
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Date: 8/18/2022 7:05:00 PM
Yes, he is... ! Let his courage never fane .Thanks a lot dear Gershon....
Date: 7/28/2022 6:36:00 PM
Europeans tend to think, "I could do this if only I had that" whereas Native Americans think, "What can I do with what I have now?" Stuck in a wheelchair, life can be very frustrating thinking about what one can't do. Good entry, Valsa! Best of luck!
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Date: 8/18/2022 7:04:00 PM
Those who think.... 'What can I do with what I have' can work miracles in life. They are the true heroes. Love your comment Rico. Thanks a lot.
Date: 7/28/2022 2:23:00 PM
Hi Valsa, this is a most touching write. This is a true Hero who accepts his condition with bravery, an inner strength. This is a beautiful write. Good Luck in the contest with this inspiring write. Has to be a fave. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX
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Date: 8/18/2022 7:00:00 PM
Hi dear friend, Vladislav, I feel so inspired by your lovely comment ! Indeed the man referred is one of great inner strength that he fights the battle of life with courage and hope. Thanks a lot once more.
Date: 7/28/2022 12:10:00 PM
wow, this is outstanding. Having a disability very rare (though not as bad as THIS) I can really relate to this poem. FAVE
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Date: 8/18/2022 6:57:00 PM
Andrea, thanks a lot ! I feel honored that a poet like you have favored this ....
Date: 7/28/2022 11:05:00 AM
Valsa, your outlook on life serves as a source of inspiration for many people. My wonderful mate, I appreciate your boldness. I'm glad you got the chance to meet such a positive person... who, despite his handicap, pain, and misery, "finds a way to rise up from the ground." We encounter a lot of individuals in our lives that have such upbeat attitudes! They undoubtedly have an impact on every one of us. Warmest regards
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Date: 8/18/2022 6:56:00 PM
What a lovely acknowledgement ! Dear Lasaad, you are always so very kind ! What you say is quite correct. When we fret over the minor set backs of life, it is so inspirational to meet such a person. Thank you so much....
Date: 7/28/2022 5:39:00 AM
How one deals with a setback says a lot about that person. Much inspiration you convey through his outlook on life. Kudos to your hero my friend. Best to you.
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Date: 8/18/2022 6:52:00 PM
You are so very right Vijay ! It is how we deal with our adversities that decides what type of persons we are. Thank you for your lovely comment.
Date: 7/28/2022 2:33:00 AM
Glad that you happened to meet such an inspiring soul... who, in spite of all his disability, suffering and pain, "finds a way to rise up from the ground". I always feel God sends us someone or creates circumstances for us to meet someone...to mend us whenever we are broken...in our lives... You are truly blessed. Best wishes in the contest dear Valsa...Have a great day... Big hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 7/28/2022 4:17:00 AM
We come across such inspiring souls in our lives ! They definitely leave an impact on us ! On seeing some and knowing the way they handle their suffering, we come to realize how blessed we are... ! Thanks a lot Ani...
Date: 7/28/2022 2:05:00 AM
It is well known that accepting suffering can relieve much pain. Well done. Hugs
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Date: 7/28/2022 4:14:00 AM
Yes, if we can accept pain and suffering, our sorrows will diminish in time. Thanks a lot Victor !
Date: 7/28/2022 1:10:00 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 7/28/2022 1:31:00 AM
Thanks a lot Gina ! Glad you liked it !
Date: 7/27/2022 11:54:00 PM
People like that are indeed a great inspiration to us all and it puts things into perspective and we realise we don't really have anything to worry about. Best of luck Valsa. Tom
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Date: 7/28/2022 12:05:00 AM
Certainly Tom. This was the valuable lesson I learnt from him. Thank you so much for your kind response...! Have a great week....

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