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My Tiny Puppy

my tiny puppy
obeys all of my commands
when he feels like it.

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Dean Wood

Date: 1/9/2025 1:21:00 PM

This was is funny because it hits so close to home. Nice one Vijay.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/6/2023 7:05:00 AM

Ha! Ha!! I get it completely. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. I appreciate the visits and you taking time to comment. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 9/25/2022 9:12:00 PM

Only when he feels lik it...... :) Interesting haiku

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/4/2020 11:32:00 AM

"Congratulations." So cute and so true. They have a mind of their own. Would love to know what they are thinking. Enjoy your day..........

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/2/2020 11:16:00 PM

So true! We have raised and trained dogs. This haiku made me smile. Congratulations Vijay!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/28/2017 8:01:00 PM

Oh Vijay I know the feeling! A wonderful and heartwarming Haiku with a nice twist in the last line :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 8:24:00 PM

Thanks Susan!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/27/2017 9:21:00 PM

ha!! Isn't that so true!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/28/2017 6:18:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2017 8:15:00 AM

Cute!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2017 9:17:00 AM

Thanks, Kim!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 8/27/2017 4:20:00 AM

Excellent. So adorable. Thanks for sharing it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/27/2017 6:47:00 AM

Thanks Ravi!

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/26/2017 8:35:00 PM

Lol! So cute :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 9:26:00 PM

Thanks Akkina!

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 8/26/2017 6:15:00 PM

Precious! My tiny 10 year old hasn't changed.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 9:25:00 PM

Thank you SW!

Eve Roper

Date: 8/26/2017 5:20:00 PM

When he feels like it, they sure are cute though :-) loved the poem, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 5:52:00 PM

Love your comments..thanks Eve!

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 8/26/2017 3:47:00 PM

Lol! A lovely post. Thanks for sharing.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Afolabi!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/26/2017 3:33:00 PM

- :))) ..... "when he feels like it" - That's the way it is :) - ... well done, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 4:04:00 PM

Thanks Anne--Lise!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/26/2017 1:54:00 PM

i find this so adorable, vijay.... ohh yes!..huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 2:35:00 PM

Thanks nette!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/26/2017 1:15:00 PM

Oh so cute and yes true too! I love this :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 2:35:00 PM

Thanks Heidi!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/26/2017 10:51:00 AM

So true.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Dale!

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/26/2017 10:46:00 AM

The conclusion has been beautiful ... Thank you for liking my The Covered Bridge ...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 1:05:00 PM

Thanks Probir!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 8/26/2017 6:23:00 AM

Cute !

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 6:37:00 AM

Thanks!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/26/2017 6:09:00 AM

that final line made me smile:-) What a co-incidence Ii have just written a haiku about a dog I will post it soon:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/26/2017 6:19:00 AM

Would love to see it soon--thanks Jan!

My Tiny Puppy

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