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My Tiny Floret

Satin streaks of sun filter her golden ray and with a glimpse of beauty float away Tiny floret precious floret carry off my dreams to bountiful fields of white where innocence plays on a sun shiny day Breeze glorious breeze carry her free show her angelic heights amid visions of white pointing towards star cover nights Tiny floret the daisy has called share your petals with the world let go my guiding hand surround yourself in splendor and with the new dawn shine

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Sheila Sacks

Date: 4/25/2017 6:00:00 AM

I think you are a wonderful father, Tim! This is so beautiful and poignant...I so enjoyed reading it!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/21/2017 2:07:00 PM

Hello Tim this is a lovely poem that you wrote for your daughter.I enjoyed your poem. Should be more than a Like a 10

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2017 2:08:00 PM

should be more than a 7 should be a 10

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 4/20/2017 8:25:00 PM

This is so touching, like me you are a loving father. Truly inspired write. A heartfelt fav. Lots Of Love, always armand.

Bawa Talwar

Date: 4/11/2017 6:39:00 PM

Indeed beautiful work. Such good use of imagery Truly poetical.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/7/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Tim, Congratulations on Poem Of The Week for this excellent write. The accolade is well deserved. Has to be a seven my friend. Your friend always....Mike.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/5/2017 3:10:00 PM

Congrats. On poem of the week..Well deserved Tim..Loved reading it again.

Constance La France

Date: 4/5/2017 9:48:00 AM

Tim congratulations on Poem Of The Week with this sweet poem.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/3/2017 7:59:00 AM

Hi Tim, What a beautiful and touching tribute to your daughter. Congratulations on getting the poem of the week. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2017 7:03:00 AM

Tim, this is so beautiful and a wonderful tribute to your daughter. A deserving Congratulations on POTW! 7 ; )

James Horn

Date: 4/2/2017 7:46:00 PM

Didn't know that the devil was a woman. Is that why they always say that a women will bring out the devil in you at times?

Gary Bateman

Date: 4/2/2017 2:46:00 PM

Hello Tim, Congratulations on POTW for this most beautiful write!! This echoes my previous comments from 03/28 as well. A dreamy tribute indeed!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/2/2017 10:50:00 AM

Oh, this is so wonderful. Daisies (and irises) are my favorite flower, but this reminds me of the progression of the dandelions in my yard - the tufts that fly away. I love it!

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/2/2017 10:55:00 AM

P.S. and little girls who have flown away, but always there for you.

Gayle Rodd

Date: 4/2/2017 9:05:00 AM

This poem has a wonderfully warm feel about it, Very nicely done. :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/2/2017 8:51:00 AM

Congratulations Tim for POTW honors...

Darren White

Date: 3/30/2017 11:16:00 AM

Lynn Marie

Date: 3/28/2017 1:09:00 PM

The special bond felt through your words is wonderfully moving Tim. To release your very heart so the young one may flourish is breathtakingly beautiful. a fave, 7+ blessings xxx

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/28/2017 10:54:00 AM

Hello Tim!! Beautifully written and most wondrous imagery for sure. I see that this verse was written for your daughter. A very heartfelt tribute indeed. A SEVEN and FAV in my book!! Best Always, Gary

Sara Ella

Date: 3/28/2017 12:35:00 AM

Love for your daughter shines in this poem <3 <3 <3 She has a wonderful father too!

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/27/2017 11:07:00 PM

Tim, this was a delight to read! Beautiful imagery. Blessings, Kim

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/27/2017 5:22:00 PM

Good Evening Tim. This entry is beautiful and the inspiration makes it all the more meaningful. I believe your little floret is blessed. Always am I honored to turn to your page and work. Well done throughout.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/27/2017 4:28:00 PM

lovely imagery, tim!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/27/2017 3:45:00 PM

Florets are our pride and joy no matter how old :-) beautiful poem Tim~*

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/27/2017 3:19:00 PM

i like the sense of both mutual love and individuality, tim... a gracious write.. huggs

Chris Green

Date: 3/27/2017 2:29:00 PM

This was beautiful Tim. It seems a tribute to someone who holds your heart and brings joy to your days.

Chris Green
Date: 3/27/2017 2:49:00 PM

That is kind of what I thought. It is beautiful my friend.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/27/2017 2:32:00 PM

Thanks Chris...yes it was inspired by my daughter

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/27/2017 2:23:00 PM

Is there a contest about angels?..This is so beautiful..makes me think of the innocence and beauty of a child's heart..It offers serenity...A fave..Daises are my fave flowers.:)

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/27/2017 2:47:00 PM

I could feel that it was about one of your daughters...:)Very beautiful poem.

Tim Smith
Date: 3/27/2017 2:29:00 PM

I don't believe there is a contest but maybe. I was watching how big my youngest has become as she made her own breakfast and when we went to the park she climbed high up into a tree...thanks Charma...I agree Daisies are beautiful