John Gondolf Poet Rhyme

My Thoughts On Aging

Just yesterday morning while shaving my face,
I looked in the mirror in total dismay;
my once youthful looks somehow time did erase,
and there stood a stranger with age on display.

My once raven hair has now turned a dull white,
and under my eyes there are bags that outrage;
my chicken skin neck is now looking affright;
I hate to admit it, I’m showing my age.

Not sure when it happened but gives me a pause;
the aging in life is still nature’s decree.
But better the aging and live with the cause,
than pushing up daisies beneath an oak tree. 



August 2, 2018

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Emilia James September 23, 2021 at 7:42 AM A good way to think John and your a long way of from those daisies too. Hugs, Emilia : ) John Gondolf September 23, 2021 at 1:14 PM I'm not planning on pushing up daisies any time soon ! thanks for all your support, Emilia, I appreciate you. Big hugs, John

Connie Marcum Wong August 31, 2018 at 12:49 PM I enjoyed your entry John. There are many who can relate to this poem. Very well written and deserving of your high placement! : ) John Gondolf August 31, 2018 at 3:01 PM Thank you so much, Connie, aging is inevitable so we may as well make light of it. John

Susan Gentry August 30, 2018 at 1:42 PM Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed this excellent poem. John Gondolf August 30, 2018 at 2:03 PM Thank you so much, Susan, I appreciate it. John

Viv Wigley August 29, 2018 at 6:40 AM How true, John, we all fall to bits eventually, but I look down at the ground each day and, if I'm above it, it s going to be another good one. great write, congrats. Regards, Viv John Gondolf August 29, 2018 at 7:08 AM Thanks, Viv, I appreciate it, and a great comment too! John

Janice Canerdy August 28, 2018 at 7:10 PM I'm back to say CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice John Gondolf August 29, 2018 at 4:16 AM Thank you, Janice, I appreciate it. John

Gershon Wolf August 28, 2018 at 5:29 PM Way to turn things around at the end there, old man... Not so funny when you see it or realize it, is it? I remember when it happened to me. I went through Elizabeth Kubler Ross' five stages you go through when you learn that you're going to die... Getting to acceptance, the fifth stage, as your poem rightfully does, is a true blessing...Congrats on your win and thanks for the food for thought!! Best wishes, Gershon John Gondolf August 29, 2018 at 4:11 AM Thanks, Gershon, aging is inevitable so we may as well have a sense of humor about it. John

Kim Rodrigues August 27, 2018 at 7:37 PM Right! We shouldn’t complain! John Gondolf August 27, 2018 at 7:49 PM That’s right we should be thankful for what we have. Thank you, Kim. John

CayCay Godwin August 26, 2018 at 5:35 AM This is a universal theme to all over a certain age. The answer is to never look in the mirror! Cute but serious, exaggerated but true, sad news but good news - hey, either way it's aging blues as cleverly presented by you. Best of luck in the contest and all else. Poetry hugs ... CayCay CayCay Godwin August 26, 2018 at 9:42 AM Good to know because I think you've got a handsome face and, yes, you are blessed with a beautiful head of hair! We are not our looks, right? We aren't even our bodies - we are that little presence in our chest that never ages. Hugs ... CayCay John Gondolf August 26, 2018 at 5:51 AM Thank you, CayCay, truth is I don’t think much about my age and it really doesn’t bother me to look in the mirror. Hey, I still have a full head of hair and not many guys my age can say that. If I wanted to get rid of the grey I could but I think it makes me look wise and dignified whether I am or not. All the best dear friend. John

Michelle Faulkner August 12, 2018 at 5:29 PM Well since the only way to stop getting older is to start pushing up daisies, I'll just keep getting older! A great fun read, good luck in the contest- John Gondolf August 12, 2018 at 7:03 PM Thanks, Michelle, I’m glad you enjoyed my humor. John

Janice Canerdy August 6, 2018 at 1:11 PM That's right, John. We don't like the only alternative to aging! Good one. Janice John Gondolf August 6, 2018 at 3:04 PM Thank you, Janice, I appreciate your comments. John

Emile Pinet August 4, 2018 at 12:45 PM This is a tongue-in-cheek approach to aging and the resulting side effects. Emile. John Gondolf August 4, 2018 at 1:47 PM Thanks, Emile, it's something we all face so we may as well have a sense of humor about it. I appreciate your visit. John

Carolyn Devonshire August 3, 2018 at 12:30 PM While the ending is humorous, many of us can relate to the first time they noticed "age" in the mirror. It's brings about a realization that all life is finite and each day we take steps closer to the end. Beautiful writing, John! Hugs, Carolyn John Gondolf August 3, 2018 at 9:22 PM Thank you, Carolyn, it’s a sobering experience when we notice. I appreciate your support. John

Winged Warrior August 2, 2018 at 6:32 PM Just remember John, beauty is in the eye of the beholder lol...vanity never goes away...great write...love & light...^WW^ John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 9:05 PM Thanks for your comments, WW, I appreciate it. John

Andrea Dietrich August 2, 2018 at 4:29 PM very nicely done.Love your ending. So so true!!! John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 5:36 PM Thank you, Andrea, so very true, I sometimes complain about having to get up in the morning when I should be giving thanks that I'm still able to get up in the morning. All the best. John

Ilene Bauer August 2, 2018 at 4:17 PM well said, john! great ending, too... John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 5:12 PM Thank you so much, Ilene, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole August 2, 2018 at 2:25 PM Age is only a number. Remember?! :) Your thoughts bring a smile. We are only as old as we feel, and I know sometimes we feel our age. Yet, love the living as long as you are here. :) Brandy John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 3:16 PM Thank you, Brandy, right now I am feeling pretty damn old...work is a bit overwhelming and the stress level is high. But reading your poetry always makes me feel young my friend ;) John

Sand Blown August 2, 2018 at 12:03 PM the, mirror...the, mirror... lol John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 4:54 PM Yes, the frightful mirror, I must start shaving in the dark. Thanks for reading, SB. John

Tom Cunningham August 2, 2018 at 9:23 AM The march of time sure catches up with us John, funny though your mind stays a teenager lol. Tom Good luck. John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 3:43 PM Thanks, Tom, I appreciate comments. John

Jan Allison August 2, 2018 at 7:33 AM Sure made me smile John, we are both writing about aging but such different poems lol:-) hugs Jan xx John Gondolf August 2, 2018 at 3:19 PM Thank you, Jan, I agree they are quite different; Yours is much more humorous, I think it will do well. John