My Thoughts Are With You

'My thoughts are with you'
      What does that mean
   Can we send our mind's notions
      to locales we've not been

   Yet I feel we can
      if by this is what's meant
   The thoughts I send with you
      ~ for aye given, never lent
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Peck Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Lovely poem, Gershon. I really love your last two lines :)
Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 7:14 PM
They love you too, Ann! Cheers, gw
Hankins Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 8:45 AM
I do believe we are able to send our energies to someone who is far away, gw. And, I have felt that I received healing energy from someone who lives far from me. Crazy? Not the last time I checked.
Baker Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 6:51 AM
Now you've made me think again, Gershon. I really liked your close, "The thoughts I send with you ~ for aye given, never lent." Have a great day my friend! Bill
Krutsinger Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 10:37 PM
I had not thought of this for a long time, but now I cannot get "my thoughts are with you" out of my mind, so thank you for that.
Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 7:14 PM
And my thoughts are with you too, Caren. Don't get a 'swelled head' now! lol, gw
Tor Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 10:09 PM
Nice thought here Gershon...
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July 11, 2022 at 9:15 PM
acute thoughts live forever within love there is no doubt~
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