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My Third Eye

My third eye is Stuck with the unfortunate view Of the brass band that connects the two spheres of my glasses. I take Advil for the head-aches. Closing it doesn't work, I've realized. When I close the middle eye the left and right want to close, too. My face then becomes a mad-house of shuddering lids, like a giant sleepy baby, I stumble through my days blinking and bonking into things and people. I'm a little better at mastering the new eye every day, though. Ever since it appeared between my eyebrows, That day at the cave's mouth, When I released my spirit from my body.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 2:35:00 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Rick, Matt
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Date: 3/2/2011 10:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Matt, in ^Rick's contest "Spirit Eye". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2011 9:43:00 AM
charmingly humorous! It's hard to master the third eyes vision, for certainly almost no one wants to hear what you know of them..when they didn't tell you. ;) Congrad's on your win Matt! Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:35:00 AM
Very clever and creative, Matt. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN, Lainie
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:11:00 AM
Love the different way you took this contest!! (I would place this higher!) Loved this!!
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:54:00 AM
Congrats Matt on your marvelous win in the spirit eye contest with this stunning entry luv.. enjoy ...
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Date: 3/2/2011 3:21:00 AM
So beautifully you have released the spirit from your body. Warm congrats for this super win.
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Date: 3/1/2011 7:23:00 PM
a unique creative approah, matt! engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on the wow win! :) huggs
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Date: 3/1/2011 5:49:00 PM
good news Matt, on the winning placment!
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Date: 2/14/2011 8:27:00 AM
ohh, matt.. this is a twirl of images, tonality and disctict language! much enjoyed with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/13/2011 2:02:00 PM
wowie, I finally found my favorite of all the third eye poems. my gosh, you took it somewhere very few people ventured. Love this creative approach! andrea
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Date: 2/13/2011 1:36:00 PM
Enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing. Steve
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