My Third Eye

My third eye is
Stuck with the unfortunate view
Of the brass band that connects the two spheres of my glasses.  
I take Advil for the head-aches.

Closing it doesn't work, I've realized.
When I close the middle eye the left and right want to close, too.
My face then becomes a mad-house of shuddering lids, like a giant sleepy baby,
I stumble through my days blinking and bonking into things and people. 

I'm a little better at mastering the new eye every day, though.
Ever since it appeared between my eyebrows,
That day at the cave's mouth,
When I released my spirit from my body.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:35 PM
Congratulations on the fifth place win in the contest of Rick, Matt
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Matt, in ^Rick's contest "Spirit Eye". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:43 AM
charmingly humorous! It's hard to master the third eyes vision, for certainly almost no one wants to hear what you know of them..when they didn't tell you. ;) Congrad's on your win Matt! Light & Love
George   Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:35 AM
Very clever and creative, Matt. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN, Lainie
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Love the different way you took this contest!! (I would place this higher!) Loved this!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Congrats Matt on your marvelous win in the spirit eye contest with this stunning entry luv.. enjoy ...
Mannan Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 3:21 AM
So beautifully you have released the spirit from your body. Warm congrats for this super win.
Onclaud Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 7:23 PM
a unique creative approah, matt! engrossing... happy thumbs up to you on the wow win! :) huggs
Maverick Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 5:49 PM
good news Matt, on the winning placment!
Onclaud Avatar
February 14, 2011 at 8:27 AM
ohh, matt.. this is a twirl of images, tonality and disctict language! much enjoyed with winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 2:02 PM
wowie, I finally found my favorite of all the third eye poems. my gosh, you took it somewhere very few people ventured. Love this creative approach! andrea
Henderson Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 1:36 PM
Enjoyed reading! Thanks for sharing. Steve
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