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My Sweet Regret

My sweet regret; resplendently
appeared the star who I would see
light up my life and fill my soul
because not ever in my whole
small world had one shone such as he!

Like polished onyx, glittery,
his dark eyes cast a spell on me
that nearly made me lose control. . . 
My sweet regret!

He soon became a malady;
this man still in my memory -
how wickedly he would cajole
me, for I kept my proper role.
No matter, he will always be. .  .
My sweet regret.


For the Any Poem, Any Subject Poetry Contest of Anne Currin

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/8/2013 1:43:00 PM
A wonderful one my sweet friend,well written and thanks for ur warm comments on my works, I appreciate. Kudos! Based on Belief
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Date: 10/20/2013 5:56:00 AM
Excellent write.
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Date: 9/20/2013 10:19:00 PM
Take the moment with no regrets. Love this poem. phyl
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Date: 8/17/2013 4:29:00 AM
Sieze the moment and have no regrets, just take precautions lol. This is a beautiful write Petal. Must hit most of us in the heart, at regret. Take care, Richard
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Date: 8/12/2013 11:29:00 AM
Better a sweet regret than a sour one! If only we had a crystal ball to tell us which ones to embrace. Hugs
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Cecilia Macfarlane
Date: 8/12/2013 11:30:00 AM
Excellent write Andrea xo
Date: 8/7/2013 4:28:00 PM
loved this romantic piece, my friend. Have I said 'congrats on your wins' yet? Congrats : )
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Date: 8/7/2013 3:03:00 PM
a very nice write Andrea....thanks for stopping by...hugs
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Date: 8/6/2013 3:16:00 PM
I can just taste the eye candy..Enjoyed reading your very descriptive and creative work..Great work expressing feelings..Thanks for stopping by and the cupping of the hand..Sara
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Date: 8/6/2013 10:09:00 AM
a sweet regret from a memory full of memories, one who had with out doubt had much respect for you as a woman, i find that easy to understand, also to give in to that regret i could understand, that knowing you also,
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Date: 8/5/2013 7:49:00 PM
Nicely written! Another enjoyable poem to read! I have never written a Rondeau, but I am sure you have mastered it. Great one! Always, Laura
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Date: 8/5/2013 2:08:00 PM
What might have been is never known. Regret and rue that don't come true. Cannot fulfill what's overdue. To keep on trucking's all we can do. Lamenting's fine for poetry. :)
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Date: 8/5/2013 6:32:00 AM
And yep, I've been out for some time now. I'm here at my plant today for the first time in over a month. I've been going around to the other plants in this district for awhile now to help train new drier operators, maintenance men, and temps. It's been hell, Andrea....hell. Looks like a few more weeks of prep and then rice will be coming in. Then things will level off to a steady hum and I'll have time for my contest and other things here. Hope you are well. Your friend, Caleb.
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Date: 8/5/2013 6:24:00 AM
Hey Gal! How the heck are ya? This poem makes me think of....Eduardo?...I remember a poem of yours about a dark-eyed gentleman. Probably not, but...that's what came to mind. Love it...a sweet regret is better than a bitter one...
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Date: 8/5/2013 1:33:00 AM
i take it you felt he was just entirely too awesome. Good poem
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Date: 8/4/2013 11:23:00 PM
Excellent. Very impressive write. Enjoyed. Thanks for you comment on my poem.
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Date: 8/4/2013 10:53:00 PM
Really it's regret wonderfully worded. Loved always, bl
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Date: 8/4/2013 7:46:00 PM
Ahhhh...Andrea. these fleeting moments that keep life interesting....great poem......
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Date: 8/4/2013 5:28:00 PM
Impressive work Andrea.Well done my friend.
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Date: 8/4/2013 4:52:00 PM
I echo Mr. Peter Duggan's remarks! Good one Andrea... big hugs, Jack xox
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Date: 8/4/2013 1:20:00 PM
A sweet regret depicted so eloquently. I found it easy to identify with these sentiments. Another brilliant write from your pen.
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Date: 8/4/2013 11:50:00 AM
Just saw you won Impress me contest..Congrats...As far as regrets ,none.Don`t look back ,full speed ahead,5`th gear always..
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Date: 8/4/2013 11:38:00 AM
such a moment lost but well remembered... pure poetic delight so bittersweet, andie... i like how you phrased this verse...thanks for coming around.. :) huggs
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Date: 8/4/2013 9:23:00 AM
WeIll - maybe to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all. I've always questioned that saying. Love, daver
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Date: 8/4/2013 8:05:00 AM
This is truly wonderful, this poem is done quite masterfully! I really enjoyed reading this fabulous write this morning! What a brilliant piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/4/2013 7:44:00 AM
I certainly have my share of regrets. I believe we all do. Nicely written!...Milt
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