My Sweet Felicity - POTD

I had three daughters and I loved them all.
And they knew I had the biggest soft spot 
For Felicity, the middle one.   Her grace followed
Everywhere and everyone in the village knew.
Her golden yellow tress, her fluttering eyebrows,
Her small upturned nose enhanced the small sweet lips.
And she was always laughing, affecting everyone.

She found a job in a children's paediatric hospital.
Children were her love and she would attend to them
As often as time permitted, leaving her to laugh,
Echoing in the corridors, by far a favourite of all.

One thing she never missed.  The service was on Sunday.
In the end, by permission, she would sing her hymn.
Many came to hear her angelic mellifluous voice.
She always chose "Amazing Grace".  Soft notes that came from the heart
And rising to a crescendo.  No one was allowed to clap.
Her final words were always the same.
You come to adore God.  Praise His Holy Name.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Tor Avatar
June 26, 2023 at 1:30 PM
Victor back again to congratulate you on this loving poem of your precious daughter. CONGRATULATIONS!!!
M  Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:59 PM
Late Congratulations on POTD Victor for a very beautiful poem about your daughter Felicity! I didn't know you had three daughters! Debx
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 2:47 PM
hey congrats on the POTD, my friend!!! this is sure one of your most popular poems
Buhagiar Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 10:04 PM
Thank you Andrea. I have written another poem which I want to check first but this one will not be as popular.
Kiser Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 12:37 PM
I am sure that it's a hard job, caring for kids in the hospital; one sees so much potential and suffering, at the same time. I think Felicity needed her spiritual time to get through her days at the hospital; a lovely pen for her. Congratulations on POTD with this one.
Romios Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 9:54 AM
Back. I saw this POTD coming and so many Congratulations, Victor….do celebrate the honors. Panagiota
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2023 at 6:35 AM
Back with congratulations on this winner. I knew it was a great one. Your visits to my page are uplifting. Sara
Seeker Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:50 PM
Oh wow! An absolutely sublime poem, Victor! A POTD too! Well deserved ~ :)
Meadows Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 10:39 PM
Amazing Grace was my Grandads favourite song. A lovely poem and tribute. Congratulations on your POTD.
George Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 9:41 PM
Hi Victor, back to your beautiful poem with Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. Enjoy your honor !
Tor Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 9:08 PM
Victor this is so heartfelt and beautiful. You have been blessed my friend with your Daughter Felicity and your other daughters. I am sure your love is great for all of them and if not there are reasons that are painful. I want to congratulate you on this great Honor of POTD and wish you many wonderful years with your beloved Daughters. God bless you Victor...
Nicole Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 5:19 PM
Dear Victor, your words are so beautiful and uplifting. Such a lovely dedication to all your daughters, especially Felicity. I can feel the love in your heart, my dear sweet friend. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Calasibetta Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 3:31 PM
Beautiful ! Congratulations on your POTD! :) Paulette
Fowler Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 3:15 PM
Truly beautiful Victor. Congratulations! :)
Buehler Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 3:06 PM
I'm back with congratulations on POTD honors, my friend. :)
Volumes Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 2:14 PM
So beautiful Victor. Its so easy to picture Feliciity by your wonderful description. Congratulations on a POTD well deserved.
Romios Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 1:01 PM
What a wonderful portrait od your daughter. I feel as though I know her. And a stunning name, to booot. Heartfelt Congratulations. May your heart beat with joyful honors Pamagiota
Lindley Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 1:00 PM
Truly amazing poetry my friend. You have a smart and wonderful daughter. Verses show she has been raised so well. A fav... God bless..
Rose  Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 12:14 PM
she sounds amazing Victor, you are blessed that she is your daughter :) congrats on POTD
Roper Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:42 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A heavenly write/story. Have a blessed day..........
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:24 AM
Hello Victor, Congratulations. This is a lovely poem about your daughter. Hugs. /Darlene\
Anaya Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Congratulations on POTD Victor Buhagiar! A lovely tribute to a middle daughter.
Proxenos Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 11:19 AM
Hi Victor what a sentimental beautiful poem and I am so happy for you that you got POTD and deservedly so, Congratulations and God Bless. Hugs, Jennifer.
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June 23, 2023 at 10:42 AM
Congratulations on POTD!
Daniel Avatar
June 23, 2023 at 8:56 AM
Lovely write on your daughter, Victor, congratulations on POTD:)
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