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My Sweet All Sour

" I am sorry!" as I told you before. You keep saying that I must do more. Should I break down and cry? Should I curl up and die? Either way- you still walk out the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/1/2011 11:11:00 PM
Hey, this is pretty good, Gerard,how did I ever miss it before?
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:42:00 AM
Wonderfully done!
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Date: 1/17/2011 3:35:00 PM
Between a rock and a hard place..Sometimes it is not easy to know what the other expects..Glad that I chose this one to read for puts new light on some situations..Your presence at my work give me chuckly kind of feeling..Me doing the Marshall Arts kind of dance not exactly..Sara
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Date: 12/28/2010 6:06:00 PM
Perfection ....Gerard.. good luck in the contest... short but sweet my friend...and reads just like a first place winner... simple yet direct... and to the point luv...
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Date: 12/25/2010 10:26:00 PM
This one is wonderful, "should I curl up and die" you captured this emotion so well~~
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