Notes About The Poem

My Sweet

****

                                 You are my sweet pet.
                            Rose, the fish cake of my eye,
                                Come with me to Rome.

                                                 
                                           1/13/2022

animalcatcutecute lovehaiku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Connie Marcum Wong

January 17, 2022 at 1:56 PM

An adorable photo to go with your sweet haiku Debra. Made me smile. I love cats. Ours is our main entertainment and she knows it and takes full advantage! Blessings xxoo

Debra L Brown

January 17, 2022 at 3:10 PM

Your comment was enjoyable to read. Cats are a joy to behold and a great source of entertainment. I have a grandfur baby LOl Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. Blessings Debra

Judy Ball

January 17, 2022 at 4:24 AM

Oh Debra what a sweet picture. I have seen my cats lying together in sleep with their arms about each other. This is so precious. Love it. Another fave. God Bless, JB

Debra L Brown

January 17, 2022 at 3:22 PM

Judy, thank you for taking the time to leave a comment. I'm honored that you chose this poem as one of your favorites. Once I had a cat who adored fish cakes. When I was preparing them, he would almost trip me. He would lie on the floor and rub the dish with his face when I gave him one. LOL He'd finally eat it after that. Debra, have a wonderful evening.

Valsa George

January 16, 2022 at 12:36 AM

So sweet a haiku and so very cute an image. Love both, Debra!

Debra L Brown

January 16, 2022 at 2:20 PM

Thanks Valsa, I glad you enjoyed thw poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf

January 15, 2022 at 8:21 PM

For me, this is simultaneously so sweet and so hilarious. Just love, it, Debra!

Debra L Brown

January 16, 2022 at 2:38 PM

Awh! The sweet things cats say to one another behind closed doors . I once had a cat who would almost trip me when I was making fish cakes. I would give him one . Instead of eating it, he would lie on the floor and rub his face on the bowl. It was like an aphrodisiac. Then he would eat it. I so glad you found the humor in it. Blessings ~ Debra