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My sweet summer love took me to the beach, it was just a fling, a crush, a short romance; but I adored him and my hand did reach, for this man who had kept me in a trance. We had come to watch the sunset fall, standing on a sun warm rock, we embraced; the sky was changing but it was a crawl, he held me close with his hands on my waist. The sky above was pale blue, mauve and gold, mingling and merging- the sun falling; love was soon ending with words still untold, around us a hundred birds were calling. The golden sun fell into the night mist, and summer l o v e at last my red lips kissed. _______________________ May 10, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/'My Summer Love' Copyright Protected, ID 18-1122-227-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Rhyming Poem on Love, Old or New sponsor, Lu Loo Second Place

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Date: 3/16/2019 9:18:00 PM
Love this piem...reminds me of times past.....sigh! Congratulations, Love, Panagioa
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Date: 3/13/2019 12:45:00 AM
Congratulations, Constance on your great win with a beautiful poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/13/2019 11:15:00 AM
Subimal, thanks for the congratulations and the beautiful ~
Date: 3/12/2019 11:38:00 AM
Congratulations, Dear Heart (Constance? I am looking at Line's comment below ;) ), on your medal-winning placement in this contest, but also, you have my thanks and appreciation for a very nice poem that I thoroughly enjoyed!! All good things to you and yours! :) Bartholomew
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Date: 3/12/2019 4:06:00 PM
BW, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, so appreciated
Date: 3/12/2019 10:57:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/12/2019 4:05:00 PM
Line, thanks for the congratulations ~
Date: 3/8/2019 7:54:00 PM
In every boy's life, there is a girl and also there is a summer...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 8:02:00 PM
Pashang, so true, thanks for visiting ~

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