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My Story Has Begun - Nursery Rhyme

My story has begun, come listen my daughter and son. Colorful building blocks are always fun, look I am almost done. We can go outside and run, playing under the big yellow sun. Gray elephant daddy won, my animal friends I love each one.

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/5/2024 2:51:00 AM

This is delightful and cute rhyme my dearesst poet friend. I'll always enjoy reading this over and over again and all kids will love this as much as I do. Enjoying it immensely once again. Warmest congratulations on your awesome win, too! Hugs, Hugs..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/5/2024 10:04:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be delightful and cute. It was fun to write. I hope the kids will like reading it. Hugs.... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/30/2024 6:11:00 PM

Paula, a big CONGRATS on your win with this adorable nursery rhyme! Janice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2024 11:48:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be adorable. It was fun to write for the kids Hope they will like it... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Joseph May

Date: 9/30/2024 3:10:00 PM

This is lovely Paula, Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2024 11:46:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your congratulations. Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be lovely. It was fun to write... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Karen Jones

Date: 9/30/2024 2:23:00 PM

Back to say congrats on your win!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 10/1/2024 11:45:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your congratulations. Glad you enjoyed reading my Nursery Rhyme write again. Always great to see you... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2024 12:17:00 PM

"1 Place" My Story Has Begun - Nursery Rhyme~Date Written:9/3/2024~~Photo:Building Blocks

Karen Jones

Date: 9/9/2024 2:24:00 PM

You captured the essence of imagination kids have in using blocks and their love for going out to run! Good job! Good luck in the contest! Have a blessed day!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2024 3:20:00 PM

"Thank You" and for your Good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. This one was fun to write for the young kids. They love building blocks/then going out to play... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/8/2024 3:39:00 PM

Such a lovely nursery rhyme Paula, children will absolutely love it. Keep writing for the joy you bring to us Soupers… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2024 3:16:00 PM

"Thank You" Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be Such a lovely nursery rhyme. I hope children will love it. I am so glad I can bring joy to my readers. That is all I want to do. I write for my readers... Thanks... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Len Gasun

Date: 9/8/2024 8:49:00 AM

So beutiful and delightful rhyme my dearest poet friend Paula. I love it and enjoyed. A winner for me. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/9/2024 3:12:00 PM

"Thank You" Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be So beautiful and delightful rhyme. Also glad you love it/enjoyed. Your words make me so happy. Thanks... Hugs... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2024 10:05:00 PM

so charming the kids will relate to this nursery rhyme, paula...winning wishes!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2024 8:38:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your winning wishes. Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. This one was fun to bring to life for the young kids to enjoy... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/7/2024 1:41:00 PM

So adorable. love it. God bless you so. Love, Gina

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/8/2024 8:35:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be So adorable/love it. This was fun to write.... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Ink Empress

Date: 9/7/2024 7:18:00 AM

This is so cute dear paula! I love the rhymes and how youv told the story here too! So flawless and heartfelt! Best wishes in the contest, sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/7/2024 8:37:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. Also thanks for your kind words. I enjoyed bringing this fun one to life... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Valsa George

Date: 9/5/2024 10:15:00 PM

Lovely nursery rhyme. I think, I too shall write one on the same image. Though I wrote two rhymes earlier, I couldn't post them. Good luck in the contest....dear Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2024 8:19:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write and for your Good luck in the contest. This one was fun to bring to life... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/5/2024 7:43:00 PM

A cute nursery rhyme. It is full of childhood dreams.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2024 8:12:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be cute/full of childhood dreams. Young kids/nursery rhyme go together... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Karen Jones

Date: 9/5/2024 4:59:00 PM

Fun rhymes Paula! Good luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2024 8:07:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write and for your Good luck in the contest. This was a fun one to write... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2024 11:07:00 AM

What a sweet invitation to play, Paula. I remember as a child my bed always had a "zoo" of stuffed animals! Brought back wonderful memories. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/6/2024 8:05:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write and for your Best wishes for the contest. Great memories are the best kind to have. A room of "zoo" stuffed animals should be in every kids room. Got to love the animals... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2024 10:08:00 AM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Children are so much fun, adding a whole new dimension to life so you are right on cue. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2024 10:23:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. I enjoy writing for children of all ages. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/4/2024 8:43:00 PM

Cute nursery rhyme in every sense of the word. Loved it.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2024 10:21:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you love my Nursery Rhyme write. That makes me happy. It was fun to bring to life. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2024 8:37:00 PM

It takes interest and talent to write for the children. It is not my forte, but you do it so well!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2024 10:19:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. I enjoy writing for kids both poems/books. I am working on a Duck book. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Terry Flood

Date: 9/4/2024 11:57:00 AM

Enjoyed this, Paula. Good luck in Eve’s contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2024 10:17:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your Good luck in Eve’s contest. Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/4/2024 11:40:00 AM

Paula, this nursery rhyme is very appealing. It's a rhyme that children will surely love. Thanks for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/5/2024 10:15:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. I hope children will love to read this one. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/3/2024 9:25:00 PM

lovely write dear poet. happy writing.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2024 8:49:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you found my fun Nursery Rhyme to be a lovely write. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/3/2024 6:02:00 PM

Love this Paula ! So many wonderful images come to mind reminding me of my childhood and a bit of Dr. Suess too ! Hugs, Susan :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2024 8:48:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you Love my fun Nursery Rhyme write. Good to see you. I think all ages love Dr. Suess. Hugs... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2024 1:15:00 PM

I like this for a nursery rhyme, as they should be short and cute like this!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2024 8:44:00 AM

"Thank You" Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. You are right, they should be short/cute. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Silent One

Date: 9/3/2024 1:03:00 PM

You have a great imagination Paula.. Best of luck in the contest dear..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2024 8:43:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your Best of luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed reading my fun Nursery Rhyme. It was so much fun to write. Have a wonderful/fun day writing away..............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2024 1:03:00 PM

A cute nursery rhyme Paula, good luck in the contest, hope your week is going well. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2024 8:41:00 AM

"Thank You" and for your good luck in the contest. Glad you enjoyed my Nursery Rhyme write. It was fun to write. I am well. Hope you are OK... Have a wonderful/fun day writing away.............