My Stain

In the restaurant noticed my stain,
people in there thought I was insane,
no more quiet,
caused a riot,
shouting my stain out verbally again.





12-8-16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 9, 2016 at 8:51 AM
You're very good at these!
Hoffman Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 5:34 PM
Thanks Mike, you are very kind!:)
Green Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:30 AM
This is funny and I know this feeling. Stains bother me and it seems that no matter what I eat, it finds my clothing somehow.
Hoffman Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Yes, your fine until you notice "the dreaded Stain!" Thanks for visit and kind comment Chris!:)
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December 8, 2016 at 11:33 PM
A good thinking limerick, Cheryl. A nice change up from the usual limericks that people post. Excellent poem that makes you think. Love always.
Hoffman Avatar
December 9, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Yes, next time I'm going to bring my shout it out spray with me, lol! Thanks for visit and kind comment Freddie! P & L~Che
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