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The first I notice in the spring are birds, I just love their dulcet musical songs; a symphonic chorus of sweet bird words, in the garden the tunes cure winters wrongs. I love how my white daisies are swaying, so gossamer like layers of chiffon; airy and gauzy- each year replaying, oh, their beauty I can depend upon. Then, come the blue margaritas tender, bright blue blooms sprawling graceful in the sun; in my spring garden- I just surrender, where my flowers interweave like lace spun. I have waited for this resurrection; this healing of heavenly perfection. _____________________________ February 25, 2019 Poetry/Sonnet/My Spring Garden Copyright Protected, ID 19-1118-188-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Spring Sonnet sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place

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Date: 3/23/2019 4:03:00 PM
Ohhhhh, your garden sounds heavenly Dear Heart and your stunning imagery makes me feel I have visited it in all its spring glory - thank you and many congrats on your win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 3/23/2019 1:30:00 PM
Wonderful write Contance, enjoyed, congrats on another win!
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Date: 2/26/2019 7:17:00 AM
bravo! this is beautiful and reads like a winner to me!
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Date: 2/25/2019 10:41:00 PM
Soooo beautiful! Perfect! Another benefit of the Silence, being able to hear the earth and its nature speak their beauty--in effect, writing your poem. Great job!
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:29:00 PM
What beautiful images you have in your special garden, Dear Heart! I never heard of "margaritas" and must find a photo of them. Best wishes in the sonnet contest with your lovely poem! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2019 2:05:00 PM
- Gorgeous poem, D.H. :) - Spring is the time of expectation, and the energy increases as the flowers sprouts :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Constance La France
Date: 2/25/2019 2:13:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thanks for visiting with that nice comment and the hugs, appreciate !

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