My Spiritual Journey

with folded hands paying respects to the rising Sun
in the orange glow, with my mother, day has begun,
bowing our heads to one who energises the world
learned by imitation, prayed God as I was  told.

walking around the deity in a clockwise turn,
applying dot of ash to forehead from temple urn,
reciting holy sanskrit prayers chanting a bhajan,
have hindu identity, initiation done!

religion taught to us through stories with deep morals,
evil was condemned and the good always won laurels,
conflict of duty, respect, conscience and honesty,
condemnation of gambling, theft, lies and cruelty.

my teenage was spent in search of self identity,
with romance brewing, god was not a necessity, 
I questioned every religious barrier thrown in,
a time for introspection, God’s denial and sin.

when was years older with friends of different beliefs,
accepted, adopted from their religion some leaves,
all with same truth, same messages with no difference,
in matters of beliefs, had no special preference!

decades from that day of a loud cry and single breath,
God followed with no real understanding or true depth,
now I know and fully believe in oneness of God,
I completely ignore religious bigots and fraud!

Like it is with me I believe it is with others,
get initiated to religion by mothers,
we journey through life with introspection and science,
But God awaits, not our religion but clear conscience!
 
9th place Premium Competition
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Written 05/Jan/ 2021
My Spiritual Journey contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 11:55 AM
This is the story of a pilgrim and a pilgrimage, Krish. Thank you for letting us travel with you. That "clear conscience" is a great gift filled with many hard decisions and some victories! Regret is truly a stumbling block keeping us from moving forward. Congratulations on your win. Warm winter blessings to you!
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 12, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Thank you Sam for your lovely observations and for walking with me! Blessings my friend!
Agustin Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 7:42 PM
Congrats! God bless you.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 10:52 PM
Thanks Beata!:)
Roper Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 1:43 PM
Congratulations on your win, Krish, God always waits for us as we are His children . Hugs Eve
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Thanks Eve! Indeed. To hime we all return!
Balasubramanian Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 3:04 AM
Congratulations:) Could relate to this one. Same upbringing, same lifestyle. Last line best. So very true. Essence of life and religion and spirituality. If you follow conscience, liberation is sure. Easy way provided by God. Have a blessed day ahead. Take care Rama
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 2:01 PM
Thanks Rama! The teachings from the Vedhas!
Seeker Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 8:34 PM
Congratulations on your placement! Thank you for participating in the contest and sharing your beautiful ongoing journey :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 9:59 PM
Thank You seeker! Yes. this journey ends when we attain salvation
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