John Freeman Poet Senryu

My Spiffy Valentine

~she’s provocative 
     my valentine, selection 
          passion of love pose

~valentine spiffy 
     like a new money she glows
          nature’s natural

~infatuating 
     no snooty rowdy beauty
          nor melancholy

For and in Honor of Linda-Marie 
The Sweetheart of P.S. 
Special Sentimental Senyru

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 24, 2011 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them John. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta February 18, 2011 at 12:29 AM Many Congrats John for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George February 17, 2011 at 11:51 PM Beautiful Senryu, John. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Andrea Dietrich February 17, 2011 at 9:01 PM I love what you said in last part: that she is not snooty or melancholy. That is a huge plus! Congratulations in Linda's contest, john.

Kash Poet February 17, 2011 at 5:33 PM Congratulations john on your well deserved win in this contest of Linda---kashinath

Robert A. Dufresne February 17, 2011 at 4:55 PM Lovely, John. Great win. Congratulations to you

Sharon Ruebel February 17, 2011 at 10:01 AM Hello John, Congratulations on your win in the contest. What a beautiful tribute to someone special! As Always, Shar

Audrey Haick February 17, 2011 at 9:42 AM Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, John. Spiffy, down to earth is always good : ) Love, Annalise

Wilma Neels February 17, 2011 at 3:56 AM Hey John, congratulations on your win with this superb entry in Linda's contest :-) W

Nette Onclaud February 16, 2011 at 9:08 PM fascinating! congrats for the whooping win, john! hugggs, :) nette

Tahera Mannan February 16, 2011 at 8:13 PM A lovely valentine. Many congrats for this win.

Robert Pettit February 16, 2011 at 7:40 PM I'm sure Linda likes this sweet entry. Congratulations on winning in her contest with this.

Dr.Ram Mehta February 16, 2011 at 6:00 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, John

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 16, 2011 at 5:40 PM Congrats Moses on your success in my contest luv... thankxx for your constant support and encouragement always...

Michael J. Falotico February 6, 2011 at 5:39 AM A great entry that Im sure will be at the Top my friend... well done and written...Michael

George Aul February 5, 2011 at 10:12 AM Great words...Good luck. Thanks for the comment......George

Sierra Biersack February 4, 2011 at 5:40 PM your welcome :) and thanks for commenting on mine it means a lot to me too.

Constance La France February 4, 2011 at 6:41 AM Thanks for commenting on my blog. This poem is just enchanting, best of luck~~

Skat A February 3, 2011 at 8:51 PM WONDERFUL POEM AND ENTRY, ENJOYED~SKAT

Harry Horsman February 3, 2011 at 5:24 PM excellent entry for the contest, John, I agree with Dr Ram on this extremely poetic. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire February 3, 2011 at 2:44 PM No one needs a snooty, rowdy or melancholy Valentine, John. I love the way you described your beauty as provocative, spiffy and infatuating. Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2011 at 1:49 PM I bet she loves this, john and she sounds really infatuating! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea

James Tate February 3, 2011 at 12:59 PM Way to go. She will like this, I'm sure. Thanks for comments on my poem

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 3, 2011 at 6:32 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Moses ... good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer and as always thankxx for your constant support of my endeavors on Soup.. luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta February 2, 2011 at 3:38 PM This is a fantastic write, with internal rhyming, alliteration, quite poetic, John

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