My Spiffy Valentine

~she’s provocative 
     my valentine, selection 
          passion of love pose

~valentine spiffy 
     like a new money she glows
          nature’s natural

~infatuating 
     no snooty rowdy beauty
          nor melancholy

For and in Honor of Linda-Marie 
The Sweetheart of P.S. 
Special Sentimental Senyru

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/24/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them John. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/18/2011 12:29:00 AM
Many Congrats John for big win in Linda's contest thru' this creative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/17/2011 11:51:00 PM
Beautiful Senryu, John. Many congrat's on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:01:00 PM
I love what you said in last part: that she is not snooty or melancholy. That is a huge plus! Congratulations in Linda's contest, john.
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Date: 2/17/2011 5:33:00 PM
Congratulations john on your well deserved win in this contest of Linda---kashinath
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Date: 2/17/2011 4:55:00 PM
Lovely, John. Great win. Congratulations to you
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Date: 2/17/2011 10:01:00 AM
Hello John, Congratulations on your win in the contest. What a beautiful tribute to someone special! As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/17/2011 9:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, John. Spiffy, down to earth is always good : ) Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/17/2011 3:56:00 AM
Hey John, congratulations on your win with this superb entry in Linda's contest :-) W
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Date: 2/16/2011 9:08:00 PM
fascinating! congrats for the whooping win, john! hugggs, :) nette
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Date: 2/16/2011 8:13:00 PM
A lovely valentine. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 2/16/2011 7:40:00 PM
I'm sure Linda likes this sweet entry. Congratulations on winning in her contest with this.
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, John
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Date: 2/16/2011 5:40:00 PM
Congrats Moses on your success in my contest luv... thankxx for your constant support and encouragement always...
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Date: 2/6/2011 5:39:00 AM
A great entry that Im sure will be at the Top my friend... well done and written...Michael
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:12:00 AM
Great words...Good luck. Thanks for the comment......George
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Date: 2/4/2011 5:40:00 PM
your welcome :) and thanks for commenting on mine it means a lot to me too.
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Date: 2/4/2011 6:41:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my blog. This poem is just enchanting, best of luck~~
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Date: 2/3/2011 8:51:00 PM
WONDERFUL POEM AND ENTRY, ENJOYED~SKAT
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Date: 2/3/2011 5:24:00 PM
excellent entry for the contest, John, I agree with Dr Ram on this extremely poetic. Harry
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Date: 2/3/2011 2:44:00 PM
No one needs a snooty, rowdy or melancholy Valentine, John. I love the way you described your beauty as provocative, spiffy and infatuating. Best wishes for success in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:49:00 PM
I bet she loves this, john and she sounds really infatuating! Good luck in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2011 12:59:00 PM
Way to go. She will like this, I'm sure. Thanks for comments on my poem
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:32:00 AM
thankxx for supporting my current contest Moses ... good luck.. will read fully as judging time draws closer and as always thankxx for your constant support of my endeavors on Soup.. luv..
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:38:00 PM
This is a fantastic write, with internal rhyming, alliteration, quite poetic, John
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