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My Soul With a Granted Life Rays

No sound of a voice could be heard The sight of the Self quite blurred As silence into disarray dissolved And no single truth could be discerned I need to rise above all that I feel Reach an inner state of mystic zeal. ***** A busy bee and a word weaver Now body feeble and in fever I could hear the voice of pain To soothe the aches was in vain Like a breath caught by the flame I gasp a fervent prayer and call His name. ***** The silence, now I broadly see The pain has been awakening my esprit Opening my heart to a decryption key God’s grace and blessings a sea How wouldn’t I pray and praise?! As my soul with a granted life rays..

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Bill Baker

Date: 11/11/2023 4:39:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Besma, your heart and soul flow freely through your words to encourage others to grow in faith through the trials and tribulations we all face. There are lessons to be learned and blessings to be received as we place our trust in the wisdom of God. Your poem touched my heart and soul, my friend. May God bless and keep you. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/5/2021 4:40:00 AM

Dear Besma, it is an experience to read your poems with deep and profound thoughts. All the three parts in this poem are thought-provoking. Enjoy reading your poems - they take me to a spiritual state. Best wishes ~ Mala

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/10/2021 12:32:00 AM

And I am blessed and deeply grateful for having a beautiful soul and a highly talented poetess granting me the kindest of compliments! Thank you so much dear Malabika! My warmest wishes and deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/19/2021 6:07:00 AM

How did I miss reading this skillfully woven poem in splendid rhymes. My apologies, dear friend, for this belated response. Glad I came here looking for anything new from you and it's a delight. Expertly penned-- deserving of accolades. I am saving this in my FAVES.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/19/2021 7:07:00 AM

The honour of your graceful presence, the great delight of your very kind and appreciative and uplifting compliment, the beauty of your remarkable humility of which I am in awe and deeply grateful.. dear Vijay, so glad too to have you always here reading, showing great interest, giving value to my humble poetry.. deeply humbled! Please do not feel sorry for not always being able to honour my very work.. I do understand that it is not that easy to keep up with all that our dear friends and poets spill of beauty! I highly appreciate your ongoing support and your valuable feedbacks that do encourage and boost fine, genuine and inspiring poetry! Thank you so much! You do honour me! May God bless you. My deepest regards.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/6/2021 7:30:00 AM

Quite a deep and thought provoking Besma. I hope that you are keeping well. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/8/2021 4:36:00 PM

I'm so pleased you enjoyed and appreciated my humble words, Tom! Thank you so much for your great support and warm wishes. Hope you are doing great.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/6/2021 2:24:00 AM

Your poetry writes itself in beauty of the gracious soul. I am not sure if these are three separate poems but I feel a sublime thread linking them all. Your mystic zeal recognise the importance of God's help and He is ready to give it for He is compassion and Divine Love. Your poetic thoughts are not to be forgotten.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/6/2021 4:13:00 AM

How deep you feel the state of words! How genuine is your response! They are three states within one! Pain detaches us from the usual, the granted, the normal, the mundane.. it gives a deeper sensitivity to what is going within and strengthens you while you are so weak to really appreciate, praise and ever be grateful.. pain allows you to see and touch and surrender to Faith.. Thank you so much, Victor for your great appreciation and support! Always an immense pleasure to read your insightful comments. My deepest regards and blessings.