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Enthralled by sunsets and the many ways I so enjoy their glory in my view; my eyes and mind absorb the bright displays which stir my soul to be creative too. Upon the sea, while sunrays splay their gold, the sun descends behind horizon's line to sink, at last, from visions that I hold- as rays, with deep-sea magic, intertwine. So like the sunset, my creative soul reflects a brilliant glow with thoughts ablaze, en massé to sink in fluid, deep control where fervid thoughts create word's vivid rays. My slipping soul sunsets into that sea- where depth and mystery form poetry. April 19, 2020 ~2nd Place~ Contest: Slipping Soul Sunsets into the Sea Sponsor: Chantell Anne Cooke Judged: 03/28/2020 Rules: One original, poem on the theme of how your soul as a sunset slips into the sea.

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Date: 2/4/2021 9:24:00 PM
Lovely poem, Sandra. Lovely to find it published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 5/13/2020 5:38:00 AM
It's a beautiful piece of art..very pleasant to read and feel...
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Date: 5/12/2020 12:54:00 PM
Hello Sandra Haight, sunsets are beautiful everywhere especially when near the water. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/12/2020 7:02:00 AM
I can see it all. There is so much poetry and soul in sunsets.
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Date: 5/11/2020 6:18:00 PM
Very nice indeed. Beau travail.
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Date: 5/11/2020 10:16:00 AM
Sandra, I so enjoy your sonnets. Happy to read this one today, with your tapestry of poetry inspiration, graceful aging, and natural wonder. A fave. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 4/28/2020 9:02:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, Sandra. Congratulations on you win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/27/2020 4:51:00 PM
Wow Sandra, this poem is so beautiful from heart and soul, it is brilliant! This gem is going into my Faves my friend. Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 4/19/2020 8:34:00 PM
Wonderful poem. Such imagery. Made me forget for a moment there is still snow on the ground. Stay well my friend.
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