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My Son, My Friend

Pride swelled watching stumbling first steps tentative footfall led to running carpet manuvers Growing ever faster Little imaginary world He wants me to join the fun returning pretend laser fire I twitch on the ground direct hit! He giggles and runs for cover Always shying hearing Grownups 'Gosh you look like Dad'! Walking away he looks to me and smiles Cons me into icecream asking why the sun goes away at night

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Date: 7/28/2013 4:30:00 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:12:00 PM
Steve, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2013 6:16:00 PM
hi Steve like it congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/26/2013 7:47:00 PM
† Big Brothers As Sisters Tis What The World Needs Now! So Sweet Your Wonderful Feature As Baby Finds Themselves Their Purity And Innocence Within A Great Big World. Love Begetting Love And Surely One's Heart Does Know ? Congratulations Upon This Lovely Painting. Love, John
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Date: 7/26/2013 9:52:00 AM
Hello Steve - Congrats on your featured poem! You have expressed these precious moments so well. Very sweet. - Gail
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Date: 7/26/2013 4:20:00 AM
hi Steve congrats on feature Shadow x smiles
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Date: 1/5/2009 8:43:00 AM
I love how the sort of sicliness of narratives on this ytheme can be. This has a great feeling to it. There is a playfulness to it but also a feeling of intent. The opening line certainly is one of seriousness. I think that the structure of the stanzas works well in capturing distinct aspects of the narrative. The French poet Appollonaire said that he shunned punctuation in his poems because the reader should know by the structure, where to pause. I think you also are aware of this.
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Date: 1/4/2009 6:32:00 PM
Enjoy every precious moment. They grow way too fast. Beautiful, beautiful. Thanks for your thoughtful comment! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/4/2009 4:01:00 AM
oh my, you have captured the heart of parenthood within this timeless poem. Amazing. I could see my own little ones in this! This is my 13 months old right now, it is so awesome!!!!! YAY, Daddy! Love, Kristin
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