My Son, My Friend

Pride swelled watching
stumbling first steps
tentative footfall led 
to running carpet manuvers

Growing ever faster
Little imaginary world
He wants me to join the fun
returning pretend laser fire
I twitch on the ground
direct hit!  He giggles and runs for cover

Always shying hearing Grownups
'Gosh you look like Dad'!
Walking away he looks to me and smiles
Cons me into icecream
asking why the sun goes away at night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sanders Avatar
July 28, 2013 at 4:30 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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July 27, 2013 at 9:12 PM
Steve, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
July 27, 2013 at 6:16 PM
hi Steve like it congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
Rhinem Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 7:47 PM
† Big Brothers As Sisters Tis What The World Needs Now! So Sweet Your Wonderful Feature As Baby Finds Themselves Their Purity And Innocence Within A Great Big World. Love Begetting Love And Surely One's Heart Does Know ? Congratulations Upon This Lovely Painting. Love, John
Debole Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 9:52 AM
Hello Steve - Congrats on your featured poem! You have expressed these precious moments so well. Very sweet. - Gail
Hamilton Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 4:20 AM
hi Steve congrats on feature Shadow x smiles
Joe Avatar
January 5, 2009 at 8:43 AM
I love how the sort of sicliness of narratives on this ytheme can be. This has a great feeling to it. There is a playfulness to it but also a feeling of intent. The opening line certainly is one of seriousness. I think that the structure of the stanzas works well in capturing distinct aspects of the narrative. The French poet Appollonaire said that he shunned punctuation in his poems because the reader should know by the structure, where to pause. I think you also are aware of this.
Winter Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 6:32 PM
Enjoy every precious moment. They grow way too fast. Beautiful, beautiful. Thanks for your thoughtful comment! Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
January 4, 2009 at 4:01 AM
oh my, you have captured the heart of parenthood within this timeless poem. Amazing. I could see my own little ones in this! This is my 13 months old right now, it is so awesome!!!!! YAY, Daddy! Love, Kristin
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